Happy laid his quill down upon the writing desk, and sighed. He picked up the collection of notes he had been writing, reading all of them aloud in his head and making sure he had written everything he wanted whosoever should find it to read. Satisfied with what would be his last words and thoughts in this world, he laid it down upon the desk, and got up from his seat. He walked across the room, over to the stool by the window. He took a deep breath to calm his nerves, before climbing up onto the stool, and fitting the hanging noose around his head, tightening it around his neck. Happy took one last look around the room, and closed his eyes.
''Don't cry for me,'' he whispered to the nothingness around him. ''I was already dead.''
And Happy tipped the stool over. His story remained nearby upon the writing desk, illuminated by the light of the candle, which flickered as the stallion choked and gagged in the darkness of the unlit shadowed area of the room.
And when Happy finally ceased his incoherent tone of agony, so did the candle suddenly extinguish, casting the room into complete darkness, until Celestia's sun dawned and brought with it the light of day.
These are the last words of Happy, a pony who nobody knew, and who was nobody to those who had known him.
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Hopefully, somebody out there who has lost a loved one due to the traumatic effects that bullying causes, as well as the depression that comes with being singled out as an outcast, discriminated by others for who and what you are, will be able to relate to this story. I wish to point out that it is not my intention to cause any painful memories to resurface for those who have experienced similar pains and losses in their own lives through this story, but hopefully such people will be able to bond with Happy and understand his pain.
Also, I am not a great writer, so of course this story is going to be awful, but I am trying to put my best effort into writing it, so try not to judge me too harshly for my way of writing. I am comfortable with my writing style and preference, and I'm not going to change it to suit the needs of others. Just wanted to say that. Now, enjoy the story, and prepare thyself for many feels.
Lol this gives me hope. With luck, this is a foreshadow as to what every last faggot fruitcake on this site will end up doing.
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And the prize for most intolerant brony goes to: *drum roll* Fried Waters.
Please leave. No one wants the likes of you here.
''Brony''? I'd rather cut my balls off than be equated to those sexually volatile, insecure future pedophiles. Oh shit sorry, that's implying that the whole reason people actually enjoy this failure of a site is a bad thing. Fucking nutjobs.
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I could say something to totally own you, but you're not worth it. I'm not here to make enemies, and i'm not here to fight with anybody. Especially those who aren't even worth my time.
(Sarcastically) And cheers for making the first comment of my crappy story an insulting one. Makes me wonder why a Brony-hater is even a member of a site with 'faggot fruitcakes' in the first place...
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Because you need my help.
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Thanks for defending me, if that was your intention.
You shall be given a mention in the next chapter.
Thank you.
3271006 *giggles*
You said "balls".
If I can have everyone's attention...
I understand that there is a douche here in the comments. I would ask that you do not give him the satisfaction of a response to his inappropriate behaviour. Ignore his comments, and leave him be. You all are better than he, and he isn't worth a quarter of your time.
Thank you, and keep it 20% cooler, ya'll.
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Lol. Typical, this loser gets a hard on every time some faggot white knight says something nice about him on the intratubes. Damn, for a minute I thought this was his genuine suicide letter and he was just so much of a loser furry that he equated real life with his sick sexual desires.
Ummm. Why has this been down voted this much?
3271054 He said "balls".
*still lol'ing*
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I don't know. But it doesn't matter. If I'm to be hated, then so be it. Better me than somebody else on this site who is undeserving of such negativity.
3271057 *giggles*
"Hard-on".
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Please, do not feed the trolls.
3271088 Aww, but it's so funny!
Wow. Internet sensation over here. Who gives a fuck if I'm in your comments, insulting your fandrones? It's the fucking internet. Sorry, forgot none of you have a life outside the internet. My bad.
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Maybe, but you are feeding him ammunition, if you catch my drift. Surely you have more sense than this? Prove yourself the bigger man. Leave him be. Let him hate to his heart's content. You don't need to drag yourself to that level.
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Best thing to do is just delete their comments entirely. Eventually they'll get bored and go away.
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I shall delete them later. I've other matter to tend to. I'll let him enjoy his time here for a while, like the generous (I hate saying this part) 'faggot fruitcake' that I am.
Somebody pass me a sick-bag...
wow, suicide memoirs
this is surprisingly alright, by no means is it the best thing on this site, but it certainly warrants a like... its kind of funny that its only through reading that haters comments was I actually compelled to read this 
3271112 Okay...can I at least eat this muffin?
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Lol, you're just a bunch of fucking rejects finding life security in creepy ass stories about cartoon horses raping and killing each other. Clearly, you need me here.
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That is somewhat ironic...XD
I really don't have much of a reason to do this kind of story. I suppose the best I've got is that, well, I hear a lot on the news about teenagers and young people committing suicide due to bullies and life problems, and I guess I just thought it would make an interesting story concept. Of course, i'm trying to keep this as serious as I can, because suicide is not something to laugh about,
Also, I'm not expecting this story to get a lot of attention. Even if, like, ten people ever viewed it, in my mind i'll think, ''Ten is better than zero''.
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Okay, you can has the muffin.
But remember to save a piece in case somebody comments with a Derpy avatar. I like that funny pony. I can relate to her clumsiness. LOL.
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Well, looks like he got himself banned, so... funtime's over.
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There will be another hater to take his place, but I ask that you don't worry for me. As much as I appreciate you and everyone else standing up for me - and understand clearly that I DO appreciate it - I would prefer that other people did not get involved. I understand that everyone needs a helping hand now and then, but I don't want those who help me to get caught up in stupid acts of the morons who litter the internet like a disease, nor do I want them to become targets themselves. I prefer to fight my own battles, but this trolling hater was not even close to a worthy challenge. I won't let the likes of him ruin my experiences on this site. And neither should any of you.
I've already gotten a start on Chapter Two. I shall probably have it up within the next few days. I want to submit some new channel content on my new Youtube channel (UniqueKJ, by the way. LOL), and i want to make it look as presentable as i can. Don't bother checking it out yet, because all the content on it so far is private, at least until i get a few more videos added on.
Also, my job as a part-time carer means that i'm not always around to carry on working on my computer, so that may delay the story for a little while. But seeing how this story has already, and quite surprisingly, attracted a fair amount of attention, i shall put in what time i get to make progress on it. Thank you all for viewing the first chapter, and i hope that you'll stay to see the rest of the story through to it's conclusion. By the way, there's going to be a little twist at the end, and i'm not talking about the noose.
Thank you to those who supported me, and i hope that you are healthy and successful in all your current and future endeavours. You guys are the reason why i have much respect for Bronies, and you is all awesome-sauce!
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so it pleases me nonetheless to see one get the boot. 
Oh, I'm not worried, as such. Being part-Australian means I have a fairly low tolerance for useless wankers, though,
Besides, if anything, I find it somewhat amusing to be accused of "having no life outside the internet" by someone who just wasted several hours of his own life writing trollfics and leaving insulting comments on a website devoted to something he hates. I should think that sort of behavior is the very definition of not having a life.
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Well said, my good Sheila!
That's what you call your kangaroo's, right?
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Thanks for viewing my story thus far, everybody! I hope you will still stay with me until the climax. Sad as it will be.
(Perhaps...)
Wow! 200 Views! I'm really honoured, guys! If you are reading this right now, I want to express my thanks to you all for helping my story reach this many views! It means a lot to a noob like myself, and me makes me feel like I 've managed to actually do something to contribute to the Brony fandom. So, yeah, thank you all so much for getting my story to 200 views, and I hope you'll be here for the next chapter, which I'm working on right now. It will be a little longer than the previous ones, so please be patient. Once more, thanks to all of you!
Will you be writing another chapter soon?
4632013 Maybe...you never know with me. I never know myself...
4632129 I'll wait then.
As a writer, you must keep your comment section in check. Block trolls, and if you really want to continue the argument, do it through PMs.
As for the story itself, I didn't like it. The concept was average to start with, and the pacing was way off. But my biggest complaint is the lack of positive elements in this:
Sad stories (including tragedies) are not about never ending sadness. You have to insert rays of sunshine for it to be effective. Telling a story about a miserable man, having a miserable life, while being emotionally tortured, is not sad or tragic FOR the reader, it doesn't have any effect on them, except a: "darn, too bad for him".
Just look at the world's most known tragedy: "Romeo and Juliet". It has a sad end, but the effect comes in the fact that the audience hoped for some happy ending, even though the play is known for it's tragic one. That is a sign of emotional involvement from the audience, which comes from the realistic portrayal characters and masterfully balanced scenes that're happy, and others sad.
To make it short: a story 100% about negative aspects doesn't make the reader emotionally invested. Create a rise before the downfall, hence and repeat (in whatever order you want: play around with the reader's expectations).
4646974 It's an old story man. It was just writing to me at the time.
But I appreciate the criticism. It helps me a lot.