when slenderman left me in paradise

by Jimbob

Author problems

Okay guy I'll level with you, I'm having serious trouble deciding where I want to go with this story or even if I want to continue with it so here's the options

1: Blank Slate: New story with a non-brony Jake joining the mane six in season 1 with no powers

2: Update when I can: Whenever I have a good idea for a chapter I'll update the story

3: Your choice: you have a better idea? please let me know!

alright sorry guys in somewhat good news I've had an inkling of an idea for a Far Cry 3 story

Comments

[Fire Blanket]

I suggest a blank slate, but with powers. The powers make it more funny/interesting, and the demon is hilarious

[Undead_Non-Brony]

Maybe knight makes him unstable and he goes supernova while fighting the titan forces.

[1I1I1I]

blank slate, but keep brony-jake and knight.
just restart from square one, as you kinda did wright yourself into a corner
i would be happy to try to be your editor again, mostly since with finals over i can dedicate time to editing.

in fact, why not get a small group of editors to both proof-read the story, and to help you with the plot? you could even set up a google docs thingy

[TenebrisSol]

Blank slate, but with powers and knight in it.

One question why haven't you brought Trixie back? that could give you some more ideas.

[jercos]

Blank slate please

[Knighthawker]

Blank slate with powers. But keep this version up.

[Kablex]

Blank Slate would be greatly appreciated.

[Kablex]

1806895 Wait, would he never have his powers then, like ever? Then, I say blank slate with powers later on, kinda like a leveling system.

[NuclearDB]

Option 1

[locnex]

option 1, sounds a bit more interesting

[joebomo11]

Preferably option 1 with powers and BLUEBLOOD ABUSE!!!!!!!!

[Scorpianhead]

Blank slate But give him powers during the nightmare moon event. If starting there if not before the end of season 1. If it's possible, please.

[Hat and clogs guy]

AUTHOR!! I have but one request. If you do decide to make a blank slate, please keep all the 60 chapters that you have now. It's an awesome story, and I would hate to see all the time you have spent trying to please us readers (and succeeding) dissapear.

[Darth]

Blank slate, but with powers and Knight in it.

[Archmagejay]

Have some ideas!
Sorry but these are my completely unrefined thoughts... so yeah make of it what you will...

Oh so he could for example become the nightmares new host (completely based off the assumption that luna is agreed to free Slendy from his burden for a bit but found the power of a demon too tempting and so kept knight but something happened and she snapped...) hmm but then Celly would just do something drastic ohh maybe you cold have him start off lost in the Everfree and he takes up residence in the old castle then nightmare comes along and dose stuff... But then when nightmare moon is hit with the magical rainbow cannon, the elements simply shift the demons spirit host to jake, but no one notices until maybe he accidentally uses them or maybe knight would convince him to not tell anyone and keep it a secret, oh and we need more Slendy please! Slendy Yay wait why am I still writing this... meh minecraft time!

[Puuguu]

Blank slate but it could be more interesting if he gained powers later on in the story.

[squidvic]

Blank slate but with knight and powers, knight is just too funny to take out

[EvilEnchantress]

blank slate and powers preferably a demon still with him but your choice media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdebhoPTsp1ryktnq.gif I HAVE A DECISION TO WAIT FOR!

[Krulity]

I would prefer a blank slate but with knight at the begining and powers later.

[chavis54]

I say blank slate, but with knight only as a guy living inside him, meaning NO POWERS
like a second personality that actually is a demon living inside him

[Soul Reaper]

i was wondering when he was going to see Trixie again. But i suppose that isnt in the cards at this point

[MLP BRONY 27]

if you go blank slate you had BETTER keep knight in it. if not then it would just be another cliche HiE fic...

[Theclockmaker]

2

[Jdude145]

Blank slate, but slowly earns power(s). Or keep going, there is a lot of time and effort invested here.

[Jimbob]

1808207
yeah it would just be a different story on my account this would stay here on hiatus

[Hat and clogs guy]

1815026 ooohhh okay :D

[Bread]

I personally would prefer no Greek gods just an insane Jake with his demon friend. Also more slaughter, I mean Slender man continuously killed people and said Knight always tried to make him kill people, then why hasn't he yet, he only did once.

[skyscraper123]

Blank slate: Knight is still in there and with powers

[More Dakka]

so I just read the whole thing start to finish to find its been axed...on a cliffhanger no less

[Primordial Deomontus]

Keep updating this fic but get rid of the greek gods, this makes this story stupid. Its one of those things that's so insane it makes Equestria look like real life.

[Zarose]

Number two. Dude this story fucking rocks. Seriously, this is gotta be one of the funniest things I've ever read, and I've read a LOT of fan fics. Keep this going man. "Brofist"tm

[The Shade]

Option two every day of the week.