Shadowblaze & Snowdrop are brother and sister with no parents. They move to Ponyville for a new start. But they run into unexpected hardships. My friend's first fimfiction story.
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marineproductions100
My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.
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Hmmm Review:
Punctuation: Bad..(Umm well some places are better then others is what I can say)
Spelling:Bad..(Missing letter and sometimes capitals.)
Plot:Bad...(Adding side notes whilst in story not good idea and plot was way to rushed)
I cannot say this story was thought out or even checked I am sorry but this is a contender for a dislike.
3228319 Eh. I'm just glad that it wasn't my story. Plus I didn't write it. I just commented it. I could care less.
I dont fully get the end
but good story.
Ok so let me get this straight:
Shadow and Snow move to Ponyville (sorta, they still need to find a place to stay) > Shorty pushes Snow and breaks her wing > Shadow rushes Snow to the hospital and runs into Rarity > Later that day the hospital says they need to keep Snow for another day to do surgery > Shadow meets Rainbow > Later that day Rainbow is his girlfriend
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"Hang on, you mean to tell me you got engaged* to someone you just met that day?!?" -Kristoff
*became their girl/boyfriend