Derpy's Optometrist

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Derpy goes out for her annual visit to the eye doctor. Simple, right?

Dramatic reading by Joehighlord

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Peachy Moon

Peachy Moon #1 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · · ·

The hell? Like seriously that...that...I don't regret reading this...

y2k890

y2k890 #2 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Very short, nice, and quick read. I hope to see more from you like this.

nomnomz

nomnomz #3 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

+10 points for using pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis in a fic
That was good, though

blowngasket

blowngasket #4 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

I regret nothing. I was personally sold with the almighty lord cthulhu entering the stage, but I assure you everything else was good too. If your goal was to be random and silly, I assure you that you have dome an excellent job at it. Take it easy, relax and reflect on what you have done today and never do it again. Not because it was bad, but because it is unique, and anything similar would make this less important to the literary community.

ThatBronyWithTheClipOns

ThatBronyWithTheClipOns #5 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Very interesting.

Shpoople96

Shpoople96 #6 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Oh god, I loved the random refrences!

A pony with blood stained fur wearing a helmet shaped like some sort of pyramid dragging a large blade behind it stopped next to the glass door and tapped on it. Derpy scowled at it until it finally left her to her napping.

Delta 727

Delta 727 #7 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

I am sitting in my Algebra II class right now pondering over what sort of strange conundrum I have just witnessed.

Alicorne

Alicorne #8 · Oct 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

And now for something completely different..... *Gets squashed to the accompaniment of a naughty sound by a giant hoof!*

shifter_goddess

shifter_goddess #9 · Oct 4th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Pfff, lung disease. Not like strabismus could be the culprit or anything. (And what the hay is going on outside? DisQord having a field day?) Hilarious. :3

Smitty91

Smitty91 #10 · Oct 4th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Yay! A Derpy story! :) It was funny the way Derpy just took in the random events, reacting to them like it was just a normal day at the eye doctor. LOL

FruitMaster

FruitMaster #11 · Oct 4th, 2013 · · ·

I regret NOTHING

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #12 · Oct 6th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Oh good it wasn't a trollfic, just a boredom story. This seem better knowing that. Well it was just an average day of mayhem, or as people in Ponyville would call it: Tuesday.

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