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Solar Flare a young stallion that has been in the School For Gifted Unicorns to be exact. He knows not of the new town. He knows not of anything outside of studying constellations and magic. He is sent by some-pony to meet other ponies.
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That was good i can see great potentieal in this.
This does have potential... potential to be less terrible than it already is. Main character is constantly referred to as a stallion and apparently 21 and yet acts like the biggest child ever. He refers to his mother as mommy and mom in the same sentence. Obvious ship fic between unlikable OC and twilight sparkle who is completely out of character. The description is painfully boring, the dialogue is unrealistic and the story is cliché. You say if we don't enjoy it there's nothing you can do, well NEWS FLASH... you could try fixing it, if you don't want to improve your crappy story don't publish it on a fanfiction site.
3183990
+1 confirm
This is shit.
3184701>>3183990 I knew this would happen!
3184701 I suck at making OCs I'll admit that.
3183990 P.S. This is a ship an everyone ship.
3184779 how does that make it better than what I said?
It's a very cheesy predictable story, which is something I enjoy reading sometimes. Why would I want to read super unique stories all the time? Sometimes I just want to relax and read some easy to read story. Which is where I see this one heading
Why you no keep going I like it
3940521 Because . . . my parents banned me from the site.