The Harbinger

by Servant Phoenix

And the Beginning of a New One

It became all white. Phoenix couldn’t see anything for a few seconds.

“Wha…. What happened?” Melody asked next to him, also fighting for her vision.

Then they saw him. A man, clothed in white garment down to the foot. He wore a golden sash around his chest. His head and hair were white and his eyes were like fire.

He spoke. His sound was majestic, but warm and full of love. “Phoenix Freeman and Melody Harbinger, my faithful servants and children. You finished your mission I gave you and your reward is waiting for you in my kingdom.”

Melody was the first to reply. “L...Love? Is that you?” She hesitated. “I always thought you look like a pony.”

Love answered, “I’m not bond to one form Melody, although normally I look like a human. If you wonder how I looked like when I spoke with the Spirits of Harmony, I'll happily show you.” He then in a flash transformed into a male alicorn. Although he didn’t wear any clothes in this form, he was still all white and shiny, and his eyes were burning like fire.

This time, Phoenix spoke, “Jesus, why are we here? Did we die?”

The alicorn nodded and transformed back into human-god form. “When you tried starting your car at your last morning, the explosives, planted into your car, went off, and you both died in the explosion.”

Melody gasped. “Is Sophie okay?”

Jesus nodded. “She is. Although, it’ll take her some time to accept that you left her.”

“Will she accept you as her savior?" Phoenix asked. "Please Jesus, I have to know!”

Jesus smiled. “With Fluttershy and Carl on her side? She’ll reborn during the next year!”

Phoenix sighed in relief. Then his eyes went wide. Wait, if we’re in heaven, then...

“She is right behind you,” Jesus said.

Phoenix turned, just to be caught in the embrace of the blond haired girl he missed so much. He gasped, his mouth twisted and broke into tears as he hugged Rachel back.

Melody closed her eyes and smiled. I told you, Phoenix. I told you what I learnt from him.

And he never lies.

THE END

Author's Note:

Special thanks to Kawazoe Natsumi for giving design advices on Melody’s appearance and Chris for helping in proofreading of the first two chapters.

Comments

[Servant Phoenix]

*includes Jesus into an MLP fanfiction*

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Sorry for the rushed ending, but after the Phoenix team teleported to Equestria and Sophie rejoined with Fluttershy, I kinda ran out of ideas for emotional scenes, and the last thing I wanted is more “give data to the reader” conversations, so instead I decided to tell those things in narrative paragraphs.

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...Okay, to be REALLY honest, during the writing of chapter 4, I got bored of my own fiction. Yeah... sucks... After they teleported to Equestria, both the "oh my gosh, Melody hide/run!" and the "Sophie wanna meet Fluttershy" feelings were lost. And I don't care about real-life politics... So...

I learnt my lesson, and looking forward to write better fictions.

If you still enjoyed it, then I'm happy for you

[Servant Phoenix]

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Which line?

[Servant Phoenix]

Hm... The_Conversion_Bureau

I have never read this before.