• Member Since 29th Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 10th, 2014

Moustache Queen

I write stories cuz I either A: bored out of my mind B: cuz I need happiness cuz of bullies or C: cuz I feel like it


Applejack knew how to buck apples tie lasso's and save Ponyville multiple times...Twilight one day was working on a spell...and created life...four cold-hearted evil TimberWoves...Applejack run to Twilight to save her....but at a cost...her life..

This is AppleJack's tale..from when she faced the TimberWolves...this is Apple's Sacrifice

(I don't own this picture!! It will forever be by nimaru)

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Applejack NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO :fluttercry:NO


IM SO SORRY I CRIED TOO :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

3110134 I know ok i had a cash on Applejack now she gone :fluttershysad::fluttershysad:


I'm sorry...so so sorry...:raritycry: at least she died saving Twilgith and being bucking awesome :pinkiesad2::raritycry:

3110141 true but i well miss her so :fluttercry:

3110159 but she will be back in the next story ok:twilightsmile:

3110175 In next story can you make in a love story about me and applejack please and have kids ok:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:


That's not a bad idea :rainbowderp:

I might actually do that :twilightsmile:

3110197 Here the rules you have two use Anthro ponies and my name watch in Matt and four the kids you have two make up name one boy and two girls ok.

3110234 ya :flutterrage: i well be watch you ok.

3110267 Good luck with your story are you going to right it next or you going to rest?


My discord meets warrior cats :twilightsmile:

Why does she have to die :raritycry:

but best story i have read about applejack ever no joke.

i loved it how you make it look like she doesn't care about her well being and safety and charging head first to save her friends.

R.I.P Applejack you will forever be know as a hero for commiting such a act of valor. :ajsmug:

(Also i was listening to snow patrol what if the storm ends and it made this story even more emotional I LOVE IT!!!)

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=SQyDGiyRPH8&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DSQyDGiyRPH8 this is the somg


Wow....never knew you would explain AppleJack's death in my thought of this story...:rainbowderp:

At least some guys and girls understand what I wrote!:rainbowdetermined2:


What can i say i look at stories and see them and read them how the author wrote them and thats what i did very beautiful story too


Well I'm happy that people like this Story...:twilightsmile:

Wait? I'm confused. Applejack left Twilight's protection spell to save Twilight, when Applejack could've of just stayed there and waited for the backup that she told Spike to get to come. Why did she jump out when she knew help was coming?:applejackunsure: I'm not dissing it. I liked the story very much (except for that for that one part that was confusing) ,but why did she jump out of the spell?:rainbowhuh:


Why Jump out of the spell when she knows the Timberwolves will stay there and the ponies with Spike will be defenceless :ajsmug:

Oh. I feel stupid now, :derpytongue2:.

Well Ah don't really mind her dying, it's just that it wasn't dramatic enough. still, Pretty good job here. Wonder why people don't give ya high rates

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