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Rainbow Dash loves her life. She has a good job, a good house, and most importantly the best friends a mare could ask for. She's also one of, if not, the fastest flier in all of Equestria. She made it into the WonderBolt Academy. She can even pull off a Sonic Rainboom!
But what one pony might define as "living the dream," another might consider a nightmare...
What happens when Rainbow Dash learns of somepony who was born fast? More importantly, what will she do if she hears that they reject it?
Black- to be devoid of light or color: dark.
Chapters (3)
Wow, This is the first fic I've read that practically killed their main character in the first chapter.
Just wondering some things just from looking at this...
1) Rainbow Dash seems to be an important character in this story just from reading the description. Yet, she's not highlighted in the tags... but Fluttershy is?
2)
but is tagged as Sad and Dark...
The confusion... all of the confusion...
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The comedy acts as a relief to the darker elements.
Example:
As for the other stuff, I fixed. It was a slight confusion between stories. Sorry.
Really like the story!
Kind of laughed a bit here.
For some reason this made me think of Dragon Age: Origins.
One of the characters, Ogrhen, I believe his name was, says that when you deselect him for your party.
Also,
My brain hurts trying to read that, the lack of spaces, I have trouble making out the words.
Dyslexia, we meet again.
Luckily it's not to bad.
dude.......... this is a story you should TOTALLY continue. I REALLY want to see how she turned out. loving it
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New chapter's out.
Dam. I can't wait to get some back story on Monochrome. And finally rainbow knows she never wanted to race her. Fucking Cloudchaser.
Fluttershy was about to interrupt, before she saw the look Rainbow had.
Interesting chapter, to say the least.
Keep it up!