When Crimson Sky wakes up not knowing who or where he is, Crimson must adapt to this strange place and its mysteries. However, when he met several odd ponies his life became easier and happier. But when he hears a strangely familiar voice in his head, everything changes. Will Crimson remember his past? Will he find the owner of this mysterious voice? Or, will he die trying?
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Looks like the only thing crimson here is the...
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3090571 Well played. Well played indeed
Also, Princess Twilicorn. If it's taking place before current canon, could you say where?
Honestly this isn't bad. People are probably down voting it cause of him being an alicorn. If you keep him away from being a Gary Stu then I couldn't care less if he's an alicorn.
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I'll do my best! Thanks for the feedback.
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No I'm downvoting it because it's a human turning into an alicorn who is possibly going to be set up as not only a hero of Equestria but also a love interest of one of the mane six. Also he's completely red.
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A lot is going to be explained in chapter 2 which I am currently working on. Besides you never know not all stories have a happy ending.
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Yeah, have fun with that but I and most readers aren't going to hang around for you to get at it.
You have one chance to make a first impression with your story and without a good enough hook, you're not going to get far. And you haven't given us that hook. The story as it stands is uninteresting and I, and the others that have voted it down will not come back and give you a second chance.
That's just the way it works.
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Ok I'm not gonna try to stop you :/
I see what you're saying, such events are terribly overdone. Although with me I'm not to picky with whom the romantic interest is but I know that using one of the main 6 or princeses can be...well bad thing since it done so very much. As to the hero part, well ya its his OC in his fic of coarse he's going to be the hero, hell It would be very hard for me not to make my OC the hero if I ever wrote a fanfic. As to the red thing, of Alicorn OC's its pretty toned down, he could be some giant black and red pony with bat wings flaming mane and tail with canines and dragon eyes, so i think all red is alright.
3093857 not "I 'could' care less", the correct phrase is "I 'couldn't' care less", I normally don't point out American's vastly inferior use of the English language but the way you said it simply doesn't make sense, what you're actually saying is that you care to an unspecified degree between some amount and completely caring, which is directly opposed to the meaning you're trying to convey that you do not care the character is an alicorn
3105262 Right fixed. Though I have to ask, did you really have to go with saying that about Americans simply because i messed up one word?
3105823 sorry, it was just one of those things that's built up over time before exploding violently and irrationally
3108079 *Sigh* Even I can't deny that it has gone from America to 'Murica. Guess I just don't want to see it.
We have Element of Time, a horrid fanfic, and there is this.
This breaks even more cliches than EoT.
Good job. *claps*
So much hate, I MUST READ THIS!
Well, the plot is shit. Spelling and grammar is good though
For everypony that is waiting for the next chapter, it may be a while. High School is throwing a lot of work at me, and I am trying to make sure that this upcoming chapter is better that the last two. This is also my first fanfic/story that I have written in a while so if you guys find anything I need to improve please tell me.
good story so far.
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
another good chapter.
I really don't understand why so many people dislike this story. So what if it has its downsides, so does every story.
Please don't let any of the dislikes stop you from writing.
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Thank you I really appreciate it!!
3399147 your welcome, it truly is a good idea and story.