When a fire breaks out in Everfree forest by unknown means, it's up to Zecora to warn Ponyville. But when she finds out that the Elements of Harmony that everypony tends to rely on are gone on vacation, can she rally the citizens of Ponyville to help put the fire out before the monsters of the forest overrun the city? Or will Ponyville become the next home of the Everfree monsters?
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xD Not bad at all! I like your descriptive writing style. It's too bad that using all three prompts in one fic made the plot a little bit inflexible!
Not bad at all, the rare three-in-one prompt user. One thing, though: the Mayor's name is properly "Mayor Mare", unless you summoned up an OC with no explanation.
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It's kinda hard to keep track of what names the fandom give ponies sometimes. She's not an OC, I guess I just used an old name for her! Thanks for the feedback.
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Yeah, I realized a little too late that trying to use three prompts in one was going to really make it difficult to flex the story a bit. I tried! Things to learn for my next story!
Wonderful story. This fanfic should be recommended in TV Tropes.
Loved the story!