Twilight Velvet, in her time a famed romance novelist, visits her daughter in Ponyville to finish her latest work. Will her romantic encounters give her the inspiration she needs?
:Twilight's mom has got it goin' on :She's all I want and I've waited for so long :Twilight can't you see? :You're just not the mare for me. I know it might be wrong, But I'm in love with Twilight's mom.
Since Twilight is gonna be all day with the mayor for the next day or two, I would like to see a Velvet X Spike chapter. I assume though, that since you have it set up that the aforementioned male is considered her son/nephew/stepson/grandson???, that won't happen.
I can dream though.....
edit: I just re-skimed chapter 1, yeah, they are implying Spike's underage as well as calling him her nephew , I can see a stallionblock as soon as I can read it, dammit.....
2914140 They have hands for front appendages and hooves for feet. I just used the expression 'crisis on our hooves' in the last chapter, because it is common in the show. But you're right. It is an inconsistency that has now been rectified.
2914400 If you will recall, I called Spike a 'teenage' dragon instead of a baby dragon in the prologue. Eighteen is still a teen. So you might want to stick around for chapter 3.
2914298 As per usual we get to see exactly the kind of people who run this site... you know, I'm disappointed, couldn't you at least be amusingly idiotic?
Twilight doesn't know what she is missing on...
:Twilight's mom has got it goin' on
:She's all I want and I've waited for so long
:Twilight can't you see?
:You're just not the mare for me.
I know it might be wrong,
But I'm in love with Twilight's mom.
He's stallion enough for two.
I'm going straight to hell for that.
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Is it wrong that I think that should have had more ponies than just Rarity and Big Mac?
Milficorn for the win. (See what I did there?)
Who will Velevet fuck next?
Cant Wait For More!!!
I have to agree. Rarity and Velvet work incredibly well together.
Nicely done on the chapter. Wonder who's next?
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Last time I checked, the tag still said Anthro.
Though I can see why that line by itself could be confusing.
Hmmm, who else could she get a ride with....?
Now there's an idea!
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Considering how the story's going? You'd be predicting possible futures xD
So Velvet can only write after getting it on.
Next please!
Velvet should have sex with Fluttershy or Pinkie next.
Cover Art has been updated. Thanks again to ANBUElite5 for providing it.
If Velvet keeps this up, she's going to have sex with the whole village.
This gonna be good! You may continue!
Always strikes me as funny how often I see author's notes about Rarity stealing the show. That delightful marshmallow pony.
“What a lovely way to spend and afternoon,” i think you meant to put "an" instead of "and"
and ps great story keep up the awesomeness
anthro pls go
Since Twilight is gonna be all day with the mayor for the next day or two, I would like to see a Velvet X Spike chapter. I assume though, that since you have it set up that the aforementioned male is considered her son/nephew/stepson/grandson???, that won't happen.
I can dream though.....
edit: I just re-skimed chapter 1, yeah, they are implying Spike's underage as well as calling him her nephew , I can see a stallionblock as soon as I can read it, dammit.....
2914298 Not you again...
So, are we going to see Twilight get a turn with Velvet? I gotta know.
this is probably like the 3rd Velvet story that I read of her having the "writer" occupation.
neat.
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Indeed. Thank you for pointing that out.
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They have hands for front appendages and hooves for feet. I just used the expression 'crisis on our hooves' in the last chapter, because it is common in the show. But you're right. It is an inconsistency that has now been rectified.
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If you will recall, I called Spike a 'teenage' dragon instead of a baby dragon in the prologue. Eighteen is still a teen. So you might want to stick around for chapter 3.
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As per usual we get to see exactly the kind of people who run this site... you know, I'm disappointed, couldn't you at least be amusingly idiotic?
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Kids tend to believe what their parental figures tell them. It's not like, say, babies being brought by a stork is any less ridiculous.
Now this is great. To have a business run a little exhibitionist sexy fun time is erotic and a very fun read. Rarity and Velvet work well together.
2911250 lol
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I fee like, based solely on that person's comment, asking them to be amusingly idiotic would be asking far too much.