For Emerald, life is hard. She gets bullied everyday and can't to anything to help it. Until one day, she is saved by a peguses named Windwaker. They meet and become friends, but for Wind, he is starting to fall in love with her. Will he tell Emerald about it? Will Emerald have the same feelings for him?
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This is a story I did with Theater Critic. Also, thank you to Sonicrules831 for making the picture for us.
Chapters (2)
2912238 there is alot of hate on this story. Thats why.
2912307
Heh, I wonder why.
Just so you know its best for the comments to remain and for readers opinions to become soured by the story itsself rather than the butthurt of the user.
2912326 but they are directing toward my co-writer. So, that is absolutley not OK.
2912488
Sure it is.
I see that you've deleted almost every comment here. That's not a very mature response.
2912574 It isn't mature of you either to be bullying Theater Critic like this. He is a friend of mine.
2912918
He may be a friend to some but I've seen him be dicks to others.
2912918 People have opinions and are expressing them. I've seen him be a real dick to a lot of people, especially when he turns into Captain Hypocrite. Deleting the comments only makes you look like the less mature one.
2912918
Regardless of your feelings for him, deleting comments will reflect negatively upon yourself no matter why you delete them. People will see this, think you can't accept criticism and judge you and your story accordingly.
As for him being a friend, you really should find a better caliber of friend. Just because he pays attention to you doesn't make him worth defending. He's an asshole to other authors, just saying "THIS STORY SUCKS" and "NEVER WRITE AGAIN!" instead of adding anything worthwhile to the comments. Yet, he asks others for constructive criticism and gets angry when nobody gives it to him.
He's a little hypocrite and the sooner you wake up to that fact the better off you'll be.
2913212 Thank you for further deliberating.
2913212 That's your opinion of him. Plus, he's not my friend just because he pays attention to me. He's my friend because he's nice.
I am sorry for deleting all of your comments. I won't do it again. Please forgive me
2913459
Possibly one of the most useless statements anybody can make concerning anything. Of course it's opinion, just like you have your opinion on him. Dismissing what somebody else says as "that's your opinion" is utterly meaningless when you get down to it. You'd be better off finishing it with saying, "but I don't agree with you."
And as I stated, he's only nice to you because you're a girl and he sees you as a potential girlfriend in other words, he wants to get in your pants. Trust me on this one. I've seen how he treats others that aren't female and he's less than kind with them. The words "demanding", "controlling" and "insufferable ass" spring to mind.
But don't let me stop you from trying to be friends with him. Honestly I think he needs all the friends he can get and if he shelved the attitude and acted a little more human, he'd have them.
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Now that's a little harsh, it is possible for two thirteen year olds of opposite genders to just be friends.
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It's very possible but I'm basing this on what others have said of TC.
If he treats everybody badly or the same way then treats another person differently, why is that? What is the difference between this person and the rest of them?
Look at the other so called "friends" that he has. They all admit that he has his faults and that he can be rough, cruel, demanding and seemingly only concerned with his own personal feelings. If this is the case, then why treat Emerald any differently?
Either there's consistency or he's being extra special nice to her for a reason. And judging from his attitude, he wants her.
"This is a story I did with Theater Critic"
No wonder.