Chapter 2- Room 604 (Windwaker)
You know, I don’t save mares getting beaten up by bullies a lot. Only once or twice, but I never talked to them.
When I saved that mare from those stallions trying to beat her up, I saw she was bleeding. Don’t know why, because they didn’t punch her, but bleeding nonetheless. I picked up her unconscious body and flew her to the Ponyville hospital. I put her in the emergency room and that was all I saw of her for the time.
Until two hours later.
I was walking home from working as a bartender and saw the exact spot where I saved the purple maned mare. I knew it was the spot because there was a little pool of blood. I was worried about the mare because she was really hurt. Yes, ponies bleed sometimes, but this was serious. I stretched my wings out and flew to the hospital.
I opened the door and walked in. I trotted to the counter. “I am here to check on a mare here.”
“Name?” The counter pony said.
"I don’t know her name, but she looked like a mare with a dark red coat, light purple hair, and a gemstone for a cutie mark.”
“Oh you mean Emerald?”
“I guess. What room is she in?”
The counter pony gave me a strange look. “How can I trust you?” The pony said.
“I was there to check her into the emergency room not that long ago.”
The pony sighed. “Room 604.” I flew up the stairs up the six floors and walked to the room numbered 604. The door looked plain and gray, with 604 painted in dark black. I knocked on the door and was greeted by the most beautiful mare I’ve ever seen.
Yes, that. Yeah, she wasn’t that cute when she was unconscious, but now, she looked amazing. She had those puppy dog eyes, the ones that you can’t say no to.
“Are you Emerald?” I asked.
She made a soft squeak and covered her muzzle with her to front hooves.
“Are you ok?” I said, confused.
Slowly, she lifted her hooves down away from her muzzle. “Yo-you didn’t hit me?” she said, sounding confused. “Don’t you hate me, though?”
“N-No. I was the pony that saved you from getting killed by those bullies.” I said.
She pondered this. “Yes. I am Emerald. I would offer you a truffle, but I ate them already!”
“Truffles, cool. Are you still hungry? We could go to lunch together.” I said, sheepishly.
“Are you kidding me? YES! But um....I don’t have any bits.” Emerald said, shuffling her front-left hoof.
“I have some bits. We could go over to Sugarcube Corner and have a cupcake.” I said.
“Ok, but this is so nice of you. Thank you!” Emerald reached out, and hugged me. She got a little blood on my coat, making it a little redder than before. Finally she released, beaming her beautiful smile at me.
We walked out of the room and checked Emerald out. Then we walked out of the hospital to go to lunch.
This was going to be great.
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2912238 there is alot of hate on this story. Thats why.
2912307
Heh, I wonder why.
Just so you know its best for the comments to remain and for readers opinions to become soured by the story itsself rather than the butthurt of the user.
2912326 but they are directing toward my co-writer. So, that is absolutley not OK.
2912488
Sure it is.
I see that you've deleted almost every comment here. That's not a very mature response.
2912574 It isn't mature of you either to be bullying Theater Critic like this. He is a friend of mine.
2912918
He may be a friend to some but I've seen him be dicks to others.
2912918 People have opinions and are expressing them. I've seen him be a real dick to a lot of people, especially when he turns into Captain Hypocrite. Deleting the comments only makes you look like the less mature one.
2912918
Regardless of your feelings for him, deleting comments will reflect negatively upon yourself no matter why you delete them. People will see this, think you can't accept criticism and judge you and your story accordingly.
As for him being a friend, you really should find a better caliber of friend. Just because he pays attention to you doesn't make him worth defending. He's an asshole to other authors, just saying "THIS STORY SUCKS" and "NEVER WRITE AGAIN!" instead of adding anything worthwhile to the comments. Yet, he asks others for constructive criticism and gets angry when nobody gives it to him.
He's a little hypocrite and the sooner you wake up to that fact the better off you'll be.
2913212 Thank you for further deliberating.
2913212 That's your opinion of him. Plus, he's not my friend just because he pays attention to me. He's my friend because he's nice.
I am sorry for deleting all of your comments. I won't do it again. Please forgive me
2913459
Possibly one of the most useless statements anybody can make concerning anything. Of course it's opinion, just like you have your opinion on him. Dismissing what somebody else says as "that's your opinion" is utterly meaningless when you get down to it. You'd be better off finishing it with saying, "but I don't agree with you."
And as I stated, he's only nice to you because you're a girl and he sees you as a potential girlfriend in other words, he wants to get in your pants. Trust me on this one. I've seen how he treats others that aren't female and he's less than kind with them. The words "demanding", "controlling" and "insufferable ass" spring to mind.
But don't let me stop you from trying to be friends with him. Honestly I think he needs all the friends he can get and if he shelved the attitude and acted a little more human, he'd have them.
2916985
Now that's a little harsh, it is possible for two thirteen year olds of opposite genders to just be friends.
2922846
It's very possible but I'm basing this on what others have said of TC.
If he treats everybody badly or the same way then treats another person differently, why is that? What is the difference between this person and the rest of them?
Look at the other so called "friends" that he has. They all admit that he has his faults and that he can be rough, cruel, demanding and seemingly only concerned with his own personal feelings. If this is the case, then why treat Emerald any differently?
Either there's consistency or he's being extra special nice to her for a reason. And judging from his attitude, he wants her.
"This is a story I did with Theater Critic"
No wonder.