A teen brony gets the best possible inter-dimensional guests, but he might get more than he wished for. He's told he has a very important destiny, but is he up to the task?
The series (abbreviated as TETOJD) will be divided into quite a few sections and subsections (and possibly sub-subsections), which will be laid out in the chapter title.
I will update this as I finish the chapters. There is no set date for each update, but I'll try to make it more often than every few months.
Note: I updated some description stuff on 4/1/15. (That's January 4th, not April 1st)
Chapters (7)
Don't even start, dude.
2867006 What do you mean?
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>A teen brony
>Main 6 appear out of nowhere in his house.
>Obvious self-insert.
>That wall of text.
It was done waaaaaay too many times. Unless you want to get a lot of unpleasant criticism I suggest you to write something more original, dude.
2873459 While I appreciate your concern and the fact that you took the time to provide a sophisticated answer, I have a plan for this story and will continue. As for it being a self-insert, I don't know how author notes work, but it specifies there that it is not a self-insert. It used to be, but was changed early on. His personality, ethics, background and moral code will be explored further in later chapters and was crafted around certain events planned later in the story,and other events were planned around his personality, having it cause events that lead further into the story. The name Jack Darrius is original as well, as it is a slightly altered name I used for a character in an online game. And he was originally 27, the teenager part was added to suit certain plot changes, as it added to the feel of multiple scenes. I'll close by once again thanking you for your concern and time, and promising that I'll get the rest of this story on paper (so to speak).
P.S, your profile picture is hilarious. Slightly vulgar, but hilarious.
Okay, first of all, there's no way you deserve this upvote-downvote ratio. You're not a bad writer. Your premise is a little cheesy, but that's never hurt anyone. The main thing is that it looks like you're having fun with this, and it annoys me that the populace of FiMFiction seems to be so reactively negative in their criticism of anything they deem overdone, trite, or done-before that they've forgotten all about Having Fun.
5694864 Thanks! I'm aware that the premise is cheesy, but this section (And So It Begins) is kinda like the prologue. The whole thing kinda goes off after that. Kinda like climbing a hill before you can sled down it. And I swear, I'll try to update this so that I'll be done with the hill that is the prologue before this story becomes 2 years old!