• Member Since 11th Feb, 2012
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Charade


I'm an over obsessed Brony. I'm not good at music or art though. Only writing so...here goes.

Comments ( 36 )

I liked it ! Can you read my fanfic too ?

Nice. You turned Derpy into an extreme masochist in yet another "Cupcakes" rendition. Oh joy.

welp, there my last bit of innocence, MOAR!

I find to be actually funny in a twisted way. Much better than the other Cupcakes style fics.

If derpy doesn't win, I will hunt you down, and turn you into muffins.:flutterrage:

Read it, loved it, love you.

Wow, i like this one, biggest twist ever! Update MOAR! :derpytongue2:

228201 I like to write stories in which a character has the means to 'challenge' or even 'break' the natural order of things. I like to look at the rules of a universe and try to figure out loop holes which could be exploited to 'break the rules' if you will.

What if there were somepony sooo fast that... Or sooo strong that.......

Here I decided to twist Derpy in such a way that would give her advantage.

You sir are wrong it is not a loophole it is a derphole:derpytongue2::rainbowkiss::moustache::moustache: but i understand:trollestia:

While I like Ditzy/Derpy as an innocent pony I am strangely happy that Pinkanema:pinkiesad2: Got a 'taste of her own medicine.'

Huh someone else writing a Pinkie is a killer fic with Derpy love. I feel less unique now.

447416

Your story seems more unique than mine. XD I honestly don't get how this story is 3x as popular as Trixie Rising.

now the horseshoe is on the other hoof. LOVE IT :yay:

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Well, did you think ALL of Pinkamina's victims would just take it lying down?

:pinkiecrazy: You bloody bastard this is getting better and better. Who will win... the muffins... or the cupcakes... only time will tell... keep up the good work my good sir.

Ps.
:pinkiesad2: If you don't update soon... I will swallow your face and chew your soul...
:pinkiecrazy: good day!

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Cant argue with that! I'll start writing strait away!

447416

Don't say that! Your story is just as unique but with a more intresting plot and still can't wait for the next chapter.:pinkiecrazy:

THE HELL DID APPLEBLOOM CAME FROM!!??!1!:rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp:

Did I just read a clopfic mixed with a grimdark fic?:twilightoops:

And why do I like it?:twilightoops:

And why did I get horny on chapter 1?:twilightoops:

Dinkia saves her i know it well predict it

sick a cupcake in my eye so wrong "Master! Are you ok?" :applecry::fluttercry::ajsleepy::applejackconfused:

well its different I'll give you that. What is it with me and cupcake related fics today? This is the forth one I've found without looking for one.

Very interesting. Well thought through and one of the cooler versions of Ditzy.

You could at least tell us what pinkie said and how it affect the (as of now) main 5. You could still do one more chapter with what I said and it would fit so much better.

I fucking loved this. You my friend are a deviously brilliant person. Bravo!

You sir, are EVIL!!! Write a chapter with the reactions and what happens to pinkie:twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

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