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Charade
I'm an over obsessed Brony. I'm not good at music or art though. Only writing so...here goes.
Charade
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I don't think I have seen this pairing yet, but you handled it relatively well.
I just wish I could see the conversation between the CMC afterwards.
Mistakes...
Mistakes everywhere!!
Scootaloo x Snips: NO.
Scootaloo x Rumble: YES.
But the story was nice, I just don't like the pairing. You still get a thumbs up from me.
Doesn't seem like a plausible reason why they suddenly had a 'go' at it. Sorry, but just no. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png
I just realized something...
I was a Snips back in elementary...
Must admit, awesome! Keep it up!
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Thanks! It was almost Snails or feather weight but I ended up going with Snips. Heh I actully omitted a few paragraphs were I /was/ going to give Scootaloo another fetish (Force feeding) but I was quite sure it fit, though I'll probably include it into the story when I post it on DA.
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Horay! Thanks
576798 Scootaloo gave you a BJ? Nice.
577609 Yeah, that. And that I was the biggest dork, but not the awkward dork, more like: The lovable dork.
That's nice. Snips deserved the fucking. Nobody even makes fanfics about him.
I always assume it's going to be vaginal...
Good story, but i have a tip for you,
Space your character lines out more. Make sure to hit the enter key twice between character speaking lines.
and...I WANTED A FULL OUT SEX SCENE!
just joking.
no really...i wanted one....
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I indent at each new idea and each speaking role. I'm not a big fan of double enter because that's not how text is printed in a book. I may give it a go though, and see how it reads with double enter.
EDIT: Hm. I can see where extended dialog would benefit from double enters.
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Take my advice...i was JUST LIKE YOU when i first began writing fanfiction. there are BIG differences in formatting between the two. :) I would go through them all but that would take me ALL DAY so just read some other fics possibly even some of mine to get a idea.
There's a lot of things that I... that the reviewer in me wanted to scream about...
At the same time, I love the paring and situation too much to be critical. Have an up-vote.
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Same here, too!
i love scoots but can you pair her with some other colt please. good story but i really dont like snips and scoots
576798 I feel you man.
waddafugk man wath the fuck