The classic dungeon-crawling RPG "Dark Cloud" collides with the universe of that of our favourite ponies, will Twilight be able to find the rest of the mane six or will she have to go it alone? what is the strange creature that keeps following her? why is she the only one to be left unaffected by the disaster?
Only fate & Time will tell.
[Temporarily on Hiatus until I can figure out how to continue the story]
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Woah. And I thought I was the only one who had heard of this game.
I'm going to hug you now...don't know when I'll stop to read this but I'm going to hug you.
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It's okay brony, I feel yah.
I should warn y'all though: this is my first time using one of the maine six as a main character and the first time I've done a fanfic in third person, so it'll seem bloody terrible from my expectations
Just a tip could you cut the story up so its not just a wall of text? its harder to read when its just a wall of text.
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Will do, thanks for the feed-back.
Any particular chapter that's bothering you?
274335 havent read it just noticed thats its a wall of text so i left the sugestion and was gona wait for it to happen first if anything.
275086
Well, I'll get right onto it.
(I'm not too good with paragraphs or literature in general 3: )
EDIT: I've taken a shot at altering them as suggested, hope it meets your satisfaction.
275094 meh good enouf. the story is good to in the case that its Dark cloud with equestria. that remind me i still got to finish those 2 games.
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I never really finished Dark Cloud, I've finished Dark Chronicle but whether I'll do that one after this or not is an entirely different story.
277856 never finished eather at least not yet Darc Cronicle gets hard when you get to the Zelamite mines.
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Personally I found that to be the hardest part of the game 3:
278111 me to...
I apologise to everypony who was reading this/have decided to track this but I must put it on hiatus for a bit longer than I expected due to IRL stress and many projects popping up.
Six playable characters, six main ponies. My only question is who is going to have to play the equivalent of the completely useless Goro.
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Rarity ofcourse
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Personally, I'd have Rarity play Ruby, but I'm going to come to the conclusion that you aren't a Rarity fan. Can't wait to see how this goes.
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Oh no, don't get me wrong I think rarity is quite a.. "unique" character. I had nothing against any of the characters in the series. (Or even fan-ones) But some people tend to take the assumption I do.