• Published 13th Jun 2013
  • 357 Views, 105 Comments

Breeze at Dawn - Theater Critic



Dawn, a unicorn with no cutie mark, meets a Pegasus, Wind, and Dawn has feelings for Wind

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Comments ( 11 )

too fast needs build up

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Ok. Thanks for the feedback!

My Little Human. Lol. Not bad, keep it up. Prepare myself for what's next!!!:pinkiecrazy:

I liked Ender's version, better.

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Ender's is the same thing.

2860712 Yeah, except he didn't rush it to sex. It was cut off before Wind even asked her to meet him in bed.

Comment posted by KamenRider deleted Aug 29th, 2013

Man, I feel bad about this.

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