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Shysoldier94


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Sgt. Jackson of the United States Marine Corps began his first tour of duty in Afghanistan. But after serving 3 months over seas, his convoy was ambushed. After the attack subsided, an RPG hit the lead humvee Jackson was standing next to. Now in a strange new colorful world so unlike his own, Sgt. Jackson tries to make sense of all of it and find the way back to his own.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 26 )

Interesting, I'll withhold judgement until I see the reaction of the Mane six to his arrival in Equestria as a pony or human it's bound to be interesting.

Pretty good so far, can't wait to see what happens next :pinkiehappy:

Pretty good, but he's a pony and thinks he's still in the middle east?:rainbowhuh:

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It will be explained later in upcoming chapters. Stay tuned!:twilightsmile:

it would be cool if he gets turned back into a human, because if he is going to ever need to use that gun he has it would be actually good if he had hands, anyway this story is pretty good keep up the great work :pinkiehappy:

Yay!Keep up the good work!

Wait a shockin' cockin' second He brought both front hooves up? Wouldn't this result in him faceplanting? Also how is he so au fait with how to use hooves and the translation of military self-defence moves designed for bipeds with fingers into hooved quadraped form?

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I fixed it to make it a little more sense. Also, in an earlier chapter, in the reading it said that after walking around for a while, he got used to his new body and its functions. And how can he use his hooves translating military defense moves designed for ones with fingers? I don't know. I can say the same thing about how they hold stuff with their hooves in the show.:derpyderp2: But I will keep in mind to make better details of things like these:raritywink:

Ooh, very interesting indeed.

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Woohoo, happy endings for everypony! Now, what about transferring me to Equestria?

317738All my internets.Take the-...wait..NO I NEED MY INTERNETS THEY R MINEZ!

Remember folks, there is no internet access in Equestria. You may want to hold off on buying your tickets until they get hooked up.

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It's not complete yet, but will upload the rest of the story today:yay:

It was a little short and had no clear plot, those two things stuck out to me.
Your next fanfic should work on those two.

I agree with the above, there was no real plot to the story. I would personally say it was more or less a feel good story.With that being said, I wouldn't mind seeing another story from you if it were to have a bit more plot.

:pinkiehappy:

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It wasn't as I thought it would turn out, but this became one of my best stories. I made the mistake in rushing the second half of this just to get it finished. :twilightoops:

But with the upcoming sequel, it will have more time spent on it and will be much longer and hopefully will be more enjoyable. :yay::twilightsmile::raritywink::rainbowkiss::derpytongue2:

I have to say, the mental image of a pony doing MCMAP is amazing.

Wait, if they didn't find his body, wouldn't that be classified as MIA? They can't confirm he was KIA without a body or a trace of anything.

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