• Published 7th Oct 2011
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Alone in the Night - BrainLapse



While stargazing Twilight discovers something she never expected to find.

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Another Note

Hey everyone. Another note on the story. I'm sorry to say this, but it's going on hiatus until I can find my drive to do the rewrites that I have planned. So sorry if I got anyone's hopes up about an update, its just I'm not in the mood to write this story. Sorry once again. Feel free to message me about anything on your mind, I'll try and help ya if I can.

Comments ( 11 )

*opens mouth* *shuts mouth*...Totally understandable. Np dude take your time. :scootangel:

that's ok, take care of yourself ;)

Take your time. Until then I'll let this story sit in my tracking list so I know when you get back to speed. :twilightsmile:

This chapter trolled me =/

But it's alright. As others said: take your time and don't rush, I'm sure this'll be perfect.

Sweet story. One thing that could improve it is -- currently you put about 1 or 2 scenes in a chapter, IMO it would read much better with about twice that much. As it currently is, the length of time I get to read before I have to click 'next chapter' is pretty short. If each chapter was a meal, I'd still be hungry after each one.

2 years! Awhman :fluttershysad: is this ever going to be finished? :fluttercry:

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In all honesty, no. I've got another story that I personally like better because I feel I go into the emotions and such a bit better, and I'm struggling with that one. If I do come back to this story, it will be rewritten at least decently, with the themes the same, but the way it's all portrayed better enacted.

3141632 Okay :pinkiesmile: fair enough. Is the other story on the site?

3144487 Im assuming its "A Cry Left Unheard"? I shall read it soons :raritywink:

When it's on hiatus for six years but you really wanna read it so you hope the person who wrote it randomly starts on it again for no reason in particular

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