Hey everyone. I kinda just felt to give ya'll a quick warning. The next chapter might be slow to come out. The main reason is for the fact that I am hitting some writers block, but atleast not in what I think is the traditional sense. I know where I am taking the story, I know what is going to happen, and I know what's happening at the start of the next chapter. The main problem is that when I start to write it, my words get tangled and I start to try and skip the scene, but it is needed. I just need to focus and spend the time to do it. So once again I am sorry but the next chapter probably will be delayed, unless the inspiration fairy decides to pay me a visit. Also if anyone would like to proof read this story, it would be greatly appriciated
Take your time! No need to rush out something you aren't happy with, so I agree with taking more time to write it well. There are other things to keep your readers interested until you are able to release a new chapter so try not to feel too pressured by us.
It's later, and I caught up.
Well, first off, it's a good thing your comp is back to normal (I think), it'll help to clear out the errors in this story. I'd be willing to proofread, but I'm a tad busy at the moment. Maybe somewhere down the line, I can take a look at it.
Also, I would only suggest merging the (part 1)(part 2) sections of your chapters, helps it flow better and feel more like a chapter :D
Anyways, keep at it, this story looks like it's heading in the right direction.
I'll gladly proofread. :)
I'm already done proofreading with tyion (A rainbows burden), so I'm happy to help out with you!
Can you tell me what a xhapter is, though?
Yea sorry bout that one. It was late and I was just using my e-reader to get the message out quickly
Hang on... Flutterlight / Tiwilight Shy with Rainbow dash and pinkie pie agreeing to help twilight after she claims not to know how to tell Fluttershy?
That sounds familier...
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/09/story-once-bitten-twice-shy.html
While I have read once bitten twice shy, this story is not going to be like that. I had Pinkie and Rainbow agree to help Twilight because of the fact that 1 those two seemed the the best ones to pair up to help Twilight. 2 Twilight always needs help. 3 This story is going to have just about nothing else in common with that story. I can't say anymore about it though or it will give away the plot.
Whatever you need to do, however long u need. Its your story, we just along for the ride ^^