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It's Mother's Day in Ponyville and the town is celebrating with a fair. it's smiles and cheers all around... except for one little filly.

This isn't actually my story. In fact it's my friend, Skyguy757's story he wrote at one in the morning and asked me to do the editing. If you like it, the credit isn't mine. I only did the editing.

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Cute story, but I dont understand the end :derpyderp1:

Is It a symbolic phrase, or is Granny Smith the real mother of Applebloom, Aj and Big Mac?

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She is a Mother from her Mother. And a Mother has always this "Super-Special-Ability" what all Mothers have^^

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Good :derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

My bad, I'm not motherlenguage english, and Apple Family's speak are pretty hard for me and often I don't understand the things :twilightsheepish:

Why does this have a alternate universe tag? I don't see anything that contradict the show.

Its symbolic in that even tho Granny Smith isn't their biological mother, she has been a mother to them since their parents death.

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Yeah.. I don't know why it was there... Got it off tho.

:applecry: why would you even write something so sad?

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Comment posted by redmon77 deleted May 14th, 2013

That was a good one :)

2575678
Same for me...

My English is not the best, but for reading is it enough^^

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Ditto

I'm italian, you?

>>Eden
>>Sky Hooves
please message eachother for a conversation. #non-hostile

*cracks neck* come mr. filthy me and you are going to be hvaing a long discussion about your foal and how you should be teaching her respect for the dead.

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Hoh my gawd...that was cute

Excellent story. Sweet and a bit sad, but with a heartwarming ending. Accolades to this Skyguy757; you've earned them. :ajsmug:

Only caught one or two errors, so good work to whoever proofread the story.

This almost gave me the feels.... I HATE the feels.... :fluttershbad:

Dear Diamond Tiara,

You just got served by Apple Bloom. Unlike you Silver Spoon has the ability of changing her ways. You will never.

5839373 Ahahahaha...funny you say that...(looks to the side awkwardly):twilightoops:

7815147 I said that 89 weeks ago, but yeah. It's true. :rainbowlaugh: The improbability happened.

that was just mean diamond tiara, really hurtful to applebloom

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