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Bionic Star


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Diamond Tiara's father, Filthy Rich, has been abusing her for several years of her life. While Diamond Tiara stayed quiet about it, one of his servants finally gave in and reported it to the Equestrian Foal Protective Services.

Now Diamond Tiara has been taken from her father and is assigned to live with the only family in the area that could legally take them in: the Apple Family.

Now Diamond Tiara is being forced to confront the reality of exactly what she believes about the apples, as well as confront her past.

It's time to see where the diamond lies within the apple trees.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 22 )

Interesting. I don't see the Comedy yet. This is more Sad than funny.

Interesting concept. I'll bite, and wait patiently for the next chapter.

Any news on how chapter 2 is coming along? :pinkiehappy:

5530266 About halfway through, in the editing stage and redoing a few bits.

5534390 Fantastic. Loved the first chapter so far but I'm excited to see Apple Bloom's reactions to having a new sister; DIAMOND TIARA of all fillies for that matter. With oblivious and likely just all too "Kids will be Kids" AJ, one dependable pony and honest to a fault, I wonder just what she'll do to having two not so get-along-iest ponies living under the same roof.

Just seems like a heck of a change for Diamond to adjust to. So yeah looking forward to seeing where all these near endless possibilities can lead. Will it all be super serious tone or have a fair amount of 'sisterly bonding'? And wow, then there's Silver Spoon! Class is going to be awkward... but Sil should be thankful Di's even allowed to stay in Ponyville, much less attend school despite her father still living in that same town. Talk about a test of friendships there. Even if Silver would want to stay friends, would her parents even allow her to be around her with all that's happened? Here's hoping for some eventual character building!

It's nice to see a more serious take on this. That first chapter was certainly a nice hook. Take your time and keep up the great work!

This is just something that crossed my mind, I doubt if will happend but... Here goes nothing: what if Diamond Tiara (when she has been there a while) tries to steal Applejack as a sister, just to be mean to Apple Bloom.! I really like the story and all, and I really hope a new chapter will come soon:heart:

I feel bad of Apple Bloom. She is more than likely going to feel the wrath of Diamond Tiara's ire the most. Especially, after Diamond's first morning wake-up.

great story so far but this makes no sence to me.......

Why was did her daddy do this to her?

was the word "was" supposed to be there?

5569893 Sometimes little things like that make it past the proof reading. If I remember correctly the original draft for that sentence was something along the lines of "Why was this happening to her?" and that somehow was left after the edit,

Thank you my good sir/madam/person of non-binary gender for pointing that out as it has been fixed now.

5570522 no problem and i am a girl i really like the story keep up the amazing work:pinkiesmile:

Apple Bloom, who was sitting on the couch staring at a book titled Fifty Shades of Hay that she had found at school in Cheerilies’s backroom. It was a rather intriguing read, although she didn’t understand half of what they were really doing. She perked her head up and cocked her head, “Wait wha’?”

:pinkiegasp: Wha- What's Apple Bloom doing reading a graphic novel such as that?! Is she out of her little pony mind?!?! :twilightangry2:

EDIT: Okay, that was a funny read! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Applebloom goes to school too Diamond. I think you'll make it.

her as a sole airlom of her lost parent.

The word is heirloom.

“Granny I may know a little about what she’s going through….” Applejack countered,

Is this implying that AJ's dad was abusive after her mom died? I feel like her and Diamond could really connect there if it is.

Diamond Tiara is used to the 'finer' things in life. Unfortunately, she was also used to her father laying a serious smackdown on her whenever. She is also used to hiding and dealing with her true emotions by making others as miserable as she is. There a lot of adjusting that has to be made.

Well a lot of stuff is going to hit the fan tomorrow at school.

Hope to see the secret of the scar get let out of the bag at some point. I wonder how the other crusaders and Silver Spoon will react...

How was she supposed to go to school tomorrow?

Walk there?

5679060 WHO LET APPLEBLOOM HAVE THAT BOOK???!!! THAT BOOK IS 100% INAPPROPRIATE FOR ANYONE, FAR LESS A YOUNG FILLY!!!

At least she doesn't truly understand the book...

Yet. :twilightoops:

6375857 yet lol it might be to late

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