• Member Since 11th Jul, 2011
  • offline last seen Aug 21st, 2011

Terror Night


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When Twilight Sparkle, Spike, and Rarity go looking for an orb that Rarity drops into a cave things get a bit...different...I bet you never expected to read an MLP horror story.

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Comments ( 28 )

:applecry: :fluttercry: :raritydespair: :raritycry: :applejackconfused:

WHY does something bad ALWAYS have to happen to Rarity?!?!?!?

<refer=Description>Hmm... Nope, I have already read like 20 horror stories...</refer>
*Le read
And now the Chain of Harmony is broken... What do you intend sir?

eh, i wasn't very impressed
:applejackunsure:
:twilightoops:
:unsuresweetie:
:rainbowhuh:

There's something to this concept, but the way that you've got it written both isn't scary at all and also isn't funny at all. If you're going for the former, then you really need to focus on building suspense and tension.

MY GOD. SO ORIGINAL.

1647081 *Pssst* Look at the url and look at the number :3

Nope. Theres shit loads of horror stories. I've written one.
You must be new here, here's what it's like here for people who post stories without reading others first:
Bad.

1647094 ... No, he's older than you on this site.

1647102 Yeah, I just saw that... WAT. First story, no bio, nothing and he's been on for 71 weeks? I smell troll. A very persistant troll. A very old troll.

1647105 This story is story number 102... Yeah.

1647107 Wait, wait, wait... last seen online: 65 weeks?... um... where did we even find this?

Holy crap this is old and obviously has buried for a long time so there's no point in making any kind of comments on it....

.... oh hell.

1647116 ... Me and others on skype are trolling about, looking at the incrediold stories of fimfic :3

1647123 Damn, how do you guys find this stuff!? Do you all just cruise through the thousands of pages on here until you get the the first stories?

1647127 ... Go to the url. Type in this:

www.fimfiction.net/story/

After the .net/story/ type in a number. We kept going from one up. We're lolling :3

1647145
I did that once. Got to 1000, figured I must have been really bored then went outside.

1647145 You guys are fucking nuts, you know that? Well, actually, I'm part of "you guys," so... we're ALL fucking nuts?

1647500 Nucking futs, fucking nuts, whatever. We're all mad here

>story #102

>user is user #217 on website

>user registered 71 weeks ago

>user last seen 65 weeks ago

...I have two questions:

1. How the FUCK did we find this fic?

2. Is the whole author and story thing supposed to be like some failed actual creepypasta or something, where since the characters disappeared, it's supposed to be as if the author disappeared as well? Or am I just overthinking this and the author is dead or forgot their password or something?

1648532
Incoming ARG

1648555 And then in a game we hear stuffs.

1707788
I am on my phone right now and it is laggy as fuck, so have a random image.
f0.bcbits.com/z/69/57/69570901-1.jpg

This story might as well have just been "Two ponies were eaten by a grue, the end."

Please continue this and ignore the haters. they are jealous of your MAD SKILLS!

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