This story is a sequel to For Cranky
Pat, an apprentice to the master cartographer Arx, has never truly left the hive. but there is a first time for everything. When Pat goes on his maiden cartography mission to the Western Pass, he quickly discovers that the outside world is not a tame place.
I want to give a huge thanks to the editors that picked through this.
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Superluminous (came up with the cartography idea)
Nicole Evermore
Holliday
Auramane