May
27th
2019
Apr
30th
2021
What does everything think about mlp:FiF? (Friendship is fucked) · 9:00pm Apr 30th, 2021
Alright, so of recent, I have made several new chapters since the last comment on the book. And currently due to my lack of followers or experience, the book and my writing hang partially in the balance of you guys (my audience), and because of the lack of comments of recent I am lacking in fan feedback relating to the book which I so desperately need due to my lack of significant experience besides my book on Wattpad called 'soviet hellscape'. So all I request is criticism in the form of
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The White devil · 151 views
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#Critic
#criticism needed
#help
#fan feedback
#help needed
#I have no fucking Idea what I'm doing
Aug
3rd
2015
recently upgraded to Windows 10 · 9:47am Aug 3rd, 2015
Me:
I've had it with you, Windows! I never want to see your operating system again! I'm leaving you and going to Ubuntu!
Windows:
But what If I offered you a new and improved version of myself?
Me:
I don't know... Maybe I- No! You can't trick me anymore!
Dec
2nd
2015
Critique Review: Their Hearth's Warming · 8:59pm Dec 2nd, 2015
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spideremblembrony · 505 views
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#critic
#critique
#review
#hearth's warming
#hearth's
#warming
#their
Nov
29th
2021
Why I don't take kind to forums of criticism. · 7:33pm Nov 29th, 2021
I don't really have too much of a problem with pointing out grammar issues or spelling errors (WITHOUT... Hostility)
But I don't like to take people's suggestions because...
-They are not what I'm looking for...
-I don't like it...
-They destroy what I have planned...
-They will not matter anyway...
For example... someone suggested to me this...
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DakariKingMykan · 426 views
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#DakariKingMykan
#Writing
#Fanfiction
#Twilight Sparkle
#Criticism.
Sep
4th
2020
Comparison of critical reception of Mulan · 2:57pm Sep 4th, 2020
1998
Rotten Tomatoes - 86%
Metacritic - 71/100
2020
Rotten Tomatoes - 73%
Metacritic - 66/100
I have to wait for a few months until it's available to rent on iTunes.
Fun fact: Ming-Na Wen, the voice actress of Mulan, made a cameo in the 2020 version as an esteemed guest.
Jun
17th
2015
Critique Review: Descending Desire · 3:36pm Jun 17th, 2015
No. Critique’s thoughts echoed in his mind as he combed shelf after shelf looking for the perfect story to review. It was a chore that he had been working all week. And yet, he was no closer than when he started.
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spideremblembrony · 559 views
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#the
#critique
#review
#fan
#ficiton
#critic
#descending desires
Apr
10th
2016
Opinion, Objectiveness and Constructive Criticism · 9:04pm Apr 10th, 2016
There have been a few blog reactions and more than a few private fights that have found their way back to me for my blog on "The Law of Equivalent Exchange - Comments Version", which kinda promotes a defensive, non-ideal philosophy of—yes—Equivalent Exchange: You act like an asshole, you get treated as such. So here's a bit more in-depth look at what I was trying to angrily get at back then.
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Wanderer D · 1,194 views
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#writing
#commenting
#constructive criticism
#objectiveness
#opinion
May
31st
2020
Hello Fellow Readers and Writers! · 11:40am May 31st, 2020
Hi! It's me. This is my first blog post and will not be my last. I am publishing a story and would like feedback after it is published. This blog post is just something that I expect to see in a lot of criticism, and that is pacing. If anyone has any pointers on the topic, I will gladly accept it with open arms. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story when it goes up!
Have a nice day!
Apr
27th
2024
Requests in term of comments · 4:16pm Saturday
I’m back and writing(for a few weeks)
Can anyone posting to my stories add constructive criticism please?
I need to know how to improve- if you don’t, my writing will get worse.
We must support each other in helping fellow writers improve.
I’ll be stopping writing from the 10th May-24th June due to exams. Hopefully that window will give me the opportunity to improve my creative writing skills.
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GRYFFINDOR123456 · 6 views
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#Creative writing
#comments
#announcements
#constructive criticism
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