KOTD Chapter 6 done · 9:12am Oct 14th, 2017
I keep looking at how many chapters I've edited, vs how many I have to go and it just seems so daunting. I know later chapters will be a lot easier, like 20s or so, but still....
I keep looking at how many chapters I've edited, vs how many I have to go and it just seems so daunting. I know later chapters will be a lot easier, like 20s or so, but still....
Holy crap there were so many typos! I'm friggin shocked! I thought I had written this when my standards had improved, but apparently not! Maaaan editing 8.8k words takes a while. I'm happier with it though. A lot happier. It looked like it had never had a spellcheck before though, which is weird cause I coulda swore that everything after chapter 20 was put through microsoft's reviewer thing. You see, this was back before I found out that Gdocs spellcheck was awful, and loved to change "its" to
After some recent inspiration a new story shall be uploaded some time tonight, expect greatness friends.
HO! HO! HO! HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY HELLO THERE...I'M OL' SAINT NICK...YOU MIGHT KNOW ME FROM THAT FAT FUCK FROM THE COCA-COLA BOTTLES EVERY YEAR! AND IF NOT...THEN I'M GOING TO HAVE TO SLAP A BITCH!...
I KNOW CHRISTMAS IS ONLY 29 DAYS AWAY...BUT I'M HERE TO TELL YOU ALL HAVE A SURPRISE EARLY CHRISTMAS GIFT COMING THIS CHRISTMAS EVE!...
(Me on Youtube, looks for a funny Tomato Gaming video)
(Sees the ad for Red Dead Online and its new black, female sheriff character)
Me: (Shrugs) Fair enough. Red Dead's not really my thing but if that's their angle, good luck. But I'd like to watch the video now. (Presses skip and at no point does the thought of blasting feminism online cross my mind)
It's that easy.
*Cracks neck* sweet lord these long chapters are murder. I mean yes they're long, but I've read them so many damn times, especially this chapter. I had spent a long time trying to make the descriptions short, sweet, meaningful and poetic. I still saw some previous dialogue problems, back when I'd say the body language of who's talking, then put in a comma, followed by the dialogue. Granted this was one of the first scenes I wrote before I had actually began the story. Before chapter 1 was even
Another longish chapter, but I think I started editing this one but never finished. There was a lot of basic dialogue that needed some sprucing up and plenty of room for more flavorful vocabulary everywhere. Didn't see much in the way of editing, besides a few unclear descriptions and actions. The ending seems s tad cliche, but this can't really go any other direction. It may also be that I'm tired of re-reading all these chapters over again. I'll confess though, these later chapters are
Well howdy y'all that have followed and random viewers!
I just wanted to post this here to let you guys know that school started a couple days ago for me, which accounts for me not being able to update anything.
What's more, is that I've joined the Football team this year. Just to give you a clue on how intense that is, it's 2 hours of practice every single weekday. Here's the kicker...
For two and a half months.
So I realized I haven't communicated a word to you, my readership, in quite some time. "Eidolons of Harmony" is still being written and transcribed at a normal pace and you should be seeing a chapter update this coming week.
Also, I added a bit of a pixelated addition to "The Real Pony Ghostbusters" cover. It was extremely lazy of me not to have done this from the get go, so sorry about that.
I haven't reread chapters 30-40 in a looong time. It feels so weird cause there's scenes I completely forgot about so in a way it's like reading my on book for the first time. I wonder how it would feel to have amnesia then getting to read your own books. Anyways, besides weird formatting and some sentences that could use sprucing up, didn't find much in the way of editing. Man Linkin Park really helps with editing these more emotional chapters.
Added in some extra dialogue, some better descriptions to better depict how people are feeling. I think the entire thing flows better now. I stil gotta watch how I keep starting every sentence with "I did this" or "I did that"
I'm on the final stretch of KOTD so I'd like to take a minute and talk to you, my wonderful readers! I figured what would be more fun than to do a Q&A? Simply drop me a comment below with whatever question/comment you have (I won't give away spoilers) and I'll do my best to answer it!
Okay! Here's the plan for the rest of the year:
I got at least one chapter in the final proofreading stage and one more that's nearly ready for that as well. You know how this time of the year is though. So at least one more chapter for sure!
Sorry that I haven't updated my stories in a while.
School started again wich mean I'll have less time to work on stories.
But don't worry The Beginning of a New Adventure isn't ending yet.
I'm still going to work on it and expand its story. Just not until I have the time for it.
I hope you all understand this and I'm really sorry about the delays.
So I learned something rather embarrassing a week ago.
YAY! School Is Gone For Now, Hugs From Friends, No More Test And FREEDOM!!!! I Love It Right Now It Is 4:00PM And I Am Free Until August I Am Just Speechless Being In A Football Field Is Fun To Celebrate The Last Day Of School And Friends Are Nothing More Than Just Awesomeness, Btw I Am Gonna Finish And Complete The Story But It Will Be On Hiatus So I Can Celebrate No More School And I Love All Of You Kawaiiz And I Will See You Soon
Below is my October 2017 submission for the Flashfic Fimfiction group.
This story was written for the prompt, "The Generous and the Dead", selected by Impossible Numbers.
IN WHICH I COME OUT OF HIDING TO SAY HELLO
Warning!! Wall-O-Text Incoming!
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