The World's Shortest TwiLuna Fic

...cannot be actually submitted to FiMFiction because of length considerations.

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Things Did Not Go Well After That

by Jeffrey C. Wells
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"Mm," said Twilight, smiling contentedly and cuddling Princess Luna close. "I wish this night could last forever!"

the end

Comments

[Shellsh0cker]

PFFFFFFAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[AugieDog]

Well:

Good night, folks!

Mike

[TrackingTarget]

*cue comments about seeing what happened next*

[Redbush]

U SO SILLY

[Drunken Hoof Style]

It's a bit long, doncha think?

[Carmine]

Still a better story than anything in the featured box.

[Skywriter]

428384
It's longer than the first draft was. I couldn't sacrifice the story quality.

[Georg]

Resembles the Worlds Shortest Fairy Tale

Once Upon a Time, They Lived Happily Ever After.

[JerryQWERTY]

Greenthumbed!

There is an wonderful challenge in writing a short story like this. Makes me think of the Earnest Hemingway story (or at least rumoured to be) that goes like this:
"For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn."

See? Short, but very effective.

Edit: Snoopes page for that story
http://www.snopes.com/language/literary/babyshoes.asp

[Cry Havoc]

EXCELLENT.

[dancingmad]

Really?

[Bad Horse]

And this is why RULES ARE BAD.

Send it to EqD and see what they say... The pre-readers always claim that they'll make exceptions if a story is good enough.

[Axis of Rotation]

Hmm, I like it, but maybe try to be a little more concise next time--too much padding in my opinion.

[Equus Pallidus]

Bloody brilliant. And, just to add to the list, let's not forget the world's shortest horror story.

The last man on Earth sits alone in his room. There's a knock on the door.

[nemryn]

B-dump tssh!

[SideLongGlance]

Upvoted and tracked

[Lurks-no-More]

Brilliant!

[PacotheTac0]

Sequel?

[Friendly Uncle]

You are a god damn genius.

[Loyal]

BRILLIANT!
-The Doctor

[UseFistNotMouth]

I would fave that. So hard.

[shutaro]

Why can't I give thumbs on the blog? No really why!?

[Eakin]

428458
I got you beat by a single letter:

The last man on Earth sits alone in his room. There's a LOCK on the door

[Sir0Chicken]

I'm sad because I can't like it. But I'm glad this exists.

[Shumiry]

Well played good sir, well played. Also enjoyed the comments immensely as I'd never heard of most, or possibly any, of those before.

[horizon]

This inspired me so much that I just had to write the sequel:

Dear Princess Celestia,

Sorry!

Your faithful student,

Twilight Sparkle

[Redbush]

428428 Oh they'l probably come out with something like the grammar is all wrong.
QUICK SOMEONE HELP HIM CHECK THE GRAMMAR

[Bad Horse]

428458 "Come in, honey," he said.

[Blue_Paladin42]

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[T_K_21]

World's shortest HiE fic:

Applejack looked at Twilight in shock. "And he just keeled over and died?"

Twilight nodded. "I guess they don't breath nitrogen where he came from."

[particle_pony]

Love it.

[iisaw]

There should be a thumbs-up button on posts! Very fun.

[SR Foxley]

Oh, you!

[Featherprop]

*claps* Well done!

[Kagitaar]

Nice. You would think Twilight would know better than to say that.

[Redbush]

428725
Then Lyra finds the body
"We can rebuild him, we have the magic"

[Skywriter]

428875
It just slipped out!

[RainbowsAreMagic]

moar pls

[PresentPerfect]

428428
I actually have to second this.

YOU NEVER KNOW BRO

[kajisora]

a rousing tale, good sir.
it demands a sequel! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

[f0xhole]

Woah woah woah, ease up on the purple prose there, Lovecraft.

[Arkaine Deao]

Hey, hey, hey now, Tolkien. I know you want to tell a good story and all, but this is just ridiculous!

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[iloveportalz0r]

428428 <-- This

[LunaUsesCaps]

tl;dr