What Could Have Been... · 6:10am Jul 25th, 2015
So I was looking through my Google Doc folders, cleaning up outdated files, when I came across one of the first concept documents for Your Human and You. I was originally not going to post it... but after having some Fireball, I've decided that I shall. Now, this was back in the very beginning, back before I actually had the story planned out fully. Strangely enough (if any of you could believe that), Your Human and You was originally going to be a clopfic. But Blackie, you cry, it kinda is a clopfic, isn't it? First of all, no it's not, and second of all, it was going to be a 'sex-almost-every-chapter' clopfic. Seriously, it was gonna be bad, and looking back now, I'm really, really glad I didn't go down that path. Still, it appears the original design remained lost within my Google Drive, and I now that I have found it again, I shall share it with you (no doubt gonna regret this in the morning).
Warning: might be a little graphic.
Fetishes:
Max: impregnation fetish, breasts and ass man,Twilight: bondage (sub), anal, voyeurism
Rainbow: masochism
Applejack: milking,
Rarity: Agalmatophilia (mannequin love), bondage (dom)
Fluttershy: bestiality, gang bang,
Pinkie Pie: Odaxelagnia(likes being bitten “just like a cupcake”), inflationSunny: asphyxiophilia, oculolinctus
Avera(lesbian): voyeurism, pedophilia
Primrose: piquerism, vampirism (enjoys biting and sucking Max's blood)
Ebony: bondage (sub), plant playPlot(heheh... "plot"):
1.) Max somehow gets to Ponyville and into Twilight's care (Celestia finds him in desert? Found by human traders and given to Twilight as gift for becoming Princess?Found in Everfree(overdone).)
-Twilight doesn't know he's intelligent until later
2.) Upon arriving, gets banged by Rainbow while Twilight watches
-"Want me to break him in for ya, egghead?"
3.) Max encounters each of the mane 6 (with fun, sexy results as Twilight watches) before he finally reveals himself.
4.) Twilight tells Celestia, who sends guards to watch over the human and study him.
-guards arrive while Twilight is out and about, gangbang ensues which Twilight walks in on.
-Twilight gets caught up in her emotions and joins in (first sexual encounter with Max).
5.) (More ideas needed(human on human sex? Applejack trying to breed him?))
-changelings...?
-Luna/Nightmare Moon scene?Note: Twilight continues to have "stress relieving" sessions with Max, but she slowly develops feelings for him.
-Max impregnates the whole mane 6 (?) - Herd?Herd: Mane 6, 3 guards, Sunny Breeze
FIRST!
Well now I know what you fancy, Max.
Good.
I'm happy that you didn't do this stuff XD
3267654 your profile pic is on my instagram
You know, it might be interesting to do that idea as an AU for the story you've got going now.
Spin-off alternate universe? I'm just laughing my ass off reading this.
I almost want to see this as an AU, but I'm seriously glad you didn't do that as the main story.
3267666 3267667 I can see it now. Your Human and You: Sex is Magic. To make up for the original story being such a tease, we'll have sex, sex, and more sex until you are all sick of sex. And then... we'll have more sex! Sex for everyone!
no.
ooooo kinky
thats fucked up
pony cuckholder?
she likes virgins
3267678 I highly doubt that there'd be too much sex...unless it completely drowns the plot.
Why more organized then my outlines lol.
It's cool seeing how much things changed form your original plan. Looks like your story was supposed to have a lot more of the sexy fun times.
I like how things ended up though.
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Hold on Maxie you don't want to ruin our delicate virgin minds like that. You gotta be subtle then BLAM the scarring begins!
......wow....This is kinda like finding out The Hobbit was going to just be German Shiza porn with little people.
So, are we going to get to read this chapter or is this just another tease, cause I really want to read this.
I say do it as a side but maybe not with the name max. That guy is firmly intrenched as one of the leading human fics of this site. But a fic of pure daft sex with your writing style would be wonderful.
Wow I learnt new words
A bit weird, but it's awesome to know that some of the best people who I like online drink fireball, good stuff man.
3267798 Here at MadMax Industries, we are alway happy to help further people's educations and expand their vocabulary!
Glad you went the way you did.
Saw this new outfit for my Skyrim character recently, and thought of your story. So I installed it a few minutes ago for you, here is the two pictures of it. Unfortunately the bodyslide files are messed up and the texture goes to hell when doing it. Not that good with bodyslide, and will figure it out later, so the character is more top heavy than its supposed to be. And, I don't have poser installed at the moment, so cannot do a better pose of the character for you. Could be reinstalled, but don't have a reason to right now.
Front
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Back
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Hope you get at least a little kick out of the outfit.
Sorry my computer is not cool enough to have the hyper realistic graphics, or run an ENB. So just plain vanilla lighting.
3267830 I'm not sure which is funnier: the Twilight Sparkle shield, or the fact she has 'We Know' written on her butt.
3267839 Glad you got a laugh out of it.
Would have put it on my follower too, but she is UNP body type, while my character and the outfit are CBBE, so doesn't work well.
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Ewww.
That's pretty funny, and it's pretty ballsy of you to put it out there that this epic you've written was originally a mindless clop story( or at least a sex-dominated one). That said, good job taking the starting point and spinning it into this epic yarn you've got going.
3267815 oh man i was afraid of click that link xD
But i was surprised about the biting one. For my experience all women like it xD
Jokes aside i am glad that yhay take the path it took and not the clopfic dark pathxD because instead of being one of the best hiefic with its own universe, most likely it would be anotherclopfic. One very educatiove xD
Those fetishes max, those fetishes.
Max: He's an ass man!
But to think this story came out from this. I guess that's how all ideas work strangely enough.
Whoa... those fetishes man, those fetishes XD
Holy crap dude, and to think, Your Human and You came form this of all things...
I feel like, someone should say something profound...
Great things can come from dirty sounding shit.
~Dustchu 2K15
Boom.
Awesome.
I think ever righter has chapters around like that it gives you something to look back at and just think about.
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sooooo glad it did not become a clop fic i fucking love this story but to think i could have been worthless oh man that hurts, its like saying lil pip got raped to death in Fallout Equestria
I think you should do a side story... it would be fun to have a X rated version. not the story just some of it
Oh goodness. That pedophilia part was weird for Avera. Can't taint the pure guards like that.
HOLY SHIT!!!!
you have grown for the better
So... basically Diaries of a Madman? With more humans? And more fetish?
3267681 Your profile pic does not belong next to that comment. Or maybe it does too much.
Oh God why....
Would read 10/10
I came.
I...I have no words right now
I have to agree, bad main story, but awesome as an AU. This sounds beyond kinky, and it even has kinkie pie!
So wait, we have
Mad Massets
Sublight Spanal
Raismbow mash
Applemilk
Ragalidom
Flutterbeast
Kinkie Odaixe Pie
Suneye Breathe
Avoyeurilia
Vamprismros
Ebond Rosevine
phytophilia (love of plants)
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Because there's nothing like risking any potential of eye herpes.
Well, I can be certainly glad that you didn't. Yeah, your story includes explicit sex, but there's quite a difference between a story were sex happens, and a story that's all about the sex.
Seems like a fiction for Quagmire.
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3267678 ... BRILLIANT!!!!!!... I will admit, though, while I did expect it to be a bit... you know, I certainly didn't expect it to be so... out there, you know? It seems like it'd be more of, say, fetishes based on stereotypes put upon the Mane 6 more than others. Plus, as someone with watery eyes, it'd be really, REALLY weird if a girl offered to do that to me; I'd have to take a shower just to make sure they're clean. Not to mention the... other things. Well, at least you made more of a "plot... with a bit of porn. Not too much, not too few, but enough." See ya.
That's interesting, certainly glad you went the way you did, with the story...
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/googles "define oculolinctus". . .
. . .
. . .
3268955 Do I dare ask?
3269356 Having bit the schmuck-bait myself. . .
No. No you don't.
Run. Run away. Run far away, and never look back.
Would have been more interesting and more kinky than most of the tame vanillia stuff I see on here at least. Still glad you went with the current version.
~Have a good one.