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Super Trampoline


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  • 4 weeks
    Finally made it to Babscon

    What a long strange trip it's been. This is much harder to do on the fly with a disabled girlfriend than flying solo. Honestly it's a good lesson but yeah I'm here I'm queer and I'm ready to party with my peers and also apparently work at the conop's desk for the next few hours once I get GS electric wheelchair out and charging. As always look for the short fat white guy currently with a beard

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  • 5 weeks
    EDIT: IRL Friend loaned me $10. Gonna make it to Burlingame.Hi this is embarrassing and awkward but I'm not sure I have enough gas money to make it the rest of the way to BABSCon could I borrow like $20 for a few days until I'm able to busk a bi

    Hi this is embarrassing and awkward but I'm not sure I have enough gas money to make it the rest of the way to BABSCon could I borrow like $20 for a few days until I'm able to busk a bit and other fund generation?

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  • 5 weeks
    Starlight 🤝🪁🪁🪁🤝Gazans

    I'm going to try to publish a story about kite flying on the 30th and encourage you to do so as well.

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  • 8 weeks
    BABSCon 2024

    Facebook places who's going to Bay area brownie spectacular convention at the end of the month? It'll be my first pony convention in like 2 years almost cuz finances have been shit and I've been taking care of my disabled girlfriend etc but she is going to be coming with me and going to her first Brony convention since 2013 Equestria LA, when she was harassed a bunch and dealt with a ton of

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  • 10 weeks
    On Death

    I call myself a hopeful agnostic. I vigorously want there to be an afterlife, where there's joy, justice, and fellowship for all God's creatures, great and small. I am unbelievably terrified of the prospect that one day I will cease to exist. And I want so desperately for all entities across space and time who have felt hurt and pain and suffering and helplessness and confusion and fear to feel

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Jun
29th
2014

I Want to Review YOUR Story! · 8:31pm Jun 29th, 2014

That's right! I've been wanting to get into reviewing for a while now, but haven't been sure how to do it. I figure I'll just jump right in.

Post in the comments section a link to your own story UNDER 5001 words that you want reviewed, and I will review it. I'll post said review to your story's page. Once a week I'll compile my reviews into a review blog post, with links back to the stories. I hope this way I can help shine a light on lesser known stuff, and help give authors precious feedback.

So, FEED ME YOUR STORIES FOR REVIEWING! (No more than one of your stories per week. If you want me to review somepony else's story, get them to comment on this blog. Have a great day! :pinkiehappy: )

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One of us, one of us.

Another temptation to start writing ponywords myself.

Before I make my request, will you do a review blog, review comment, or review PM? I'm just curious. :unsuresweetie:

2243707 From the blog post:

I'll post said review to your story's page. Once a week I'll compile my reviews into a review blog post, with links back to the stories.

:twilightsmile:

Alright then, probably one of my best stories so far,

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/174908/the-equestrian-chronicles-the-awakening-of-the-light

could you do a review blog?

2243716 Alright, if you're up to it, review my story Legion's Plague. It's nearing completion, and I'm wondering what I could do to not spoil the ending and fix up in already existing chapters. :twilightsmile:

Sister's Reunited I would like dis reviewed :pinkiehappy:

2243706 Doooooo it! Give into the urge. Join the herd! :rainbowdetermined2:

ur prob going to hate me for this ugh I want this reviewed Rainbow's New Pet

Hmmm Sure why not ^^
Twilight Moon
It's two chaps in enough for a review:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Super Trampoline deleted Jun 29th, 2014

2243745 Meh, it can't be more graphic than 120 Days of Blueblood.:applejackunsure: Also, "hating" doesn't have an "e" in it. :rainbowwild:

2243779 From the blog post:

No more than one of your stories per week.

Pick one, plox! :pinkiesmile:

2243810 How about the one shot? Precious Soul of Mine. I want to see if it is worth making a sequel.

Link

But to quote Matthias, "Wow. This is shit."

Thank you. :twilightsmile:

you can take a whack at any of my fics

2244290 i'd say For Science, its my attempt at a dark fic. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/133221/for-science

Heh. Fair enough. I was just confused about the situation. :twilightsheepish: You posted on my profile out of nowhere, then asked me to read one of your stories, which I did, then you asked me about my story, and then you disappeared. I wasn't sure what to think.

Okay then, sure? Applied Starlight.

2243720 So as to not swamp myself, I have a policy of only reviewing the first 5,000 words of a story, unless I absolutely love it and keep reading. Do you still want me to look at this one, or would you prefer I take a gander at a oneshot?

2247156 I want you to look at this one, because I really lack an opinion on the whole thing. Sadly, I consider it my best work...:fluttershysad: Please tell me what I could improve in each chapter...

A review of this story would be appreciated. :rainbowwild:

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