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The Moon's ApprenticeTwilight Sparkle failed her entrance exams for Celestia’s school. Worse, she is a danger to both herself and others, resulting in her magic being suppressed. Dreams crushed and now one of the weakest unicorns, a nightmare comes to her.by Forthwith
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2837112 You are most welcome! I find the characterisation to be the most interesting factor of your writing, though the lucid descriptions come close second. Whilst the story lends itself to a ride-along perspective, these draw the reader's viewpoint to one within the characters own limited perception, whether it be the chaos of frantic combat or the laser focus of survival in hostile environments. Can't wait to see where the story leads from here.
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You are most welcome! I find the characterisation to be the most interesting factor of your writing, though the lucid descriptions come close second. Whilst the story lends itself to a ride-along perspective, these draw the reader's viewpoint to one within the characters own limited perception, whether it be the chaos of frantic combat or the laser focus of survival in hostile environments. Can't wait to see where the story leads from here.
Thanks for the fave on The Wolf of War
Can I ask if you have a favorite part/scene so far? Or if anything really caught your eye in the story?
Thanks so much for the favorite on The Return of Sunset! Let me know what you think!
Thank