Wierd Love

by nikky0825

Chapter 1 Wierd Love

Chapter 1
by nikky0825

long time ago,
princess Celestia and Luna where dead but twilight and her friends where not there already big even spike,
twilight got home early she called her friends for a slumber party for 20 days because she loves her friends,
twilight called Applejack first,the Rarity,then Fluttershy,then Rainbow dash and Pinkie pie they got there already,
then Applejack got something for Rarity but Rarity was up stairs she saw Spike sleeping and he was dreaming Applejack gave Rarity a surprise and Applejack said "that's your new diamond keep it safe i have another one at home i will get it and you will make a beautiful dress for somebody thankful and if you did bad i ain't gonna give you it partner" and Rarity said "wow! My cutie mark diamond do you have one..." And Applejack said "yes Rarity i have one please don't even have another crush please or else ain't no more" and Rarity promise and said "but..." and Applejack got down and the party was over there friends slept even twilight they tiptoe and found a better place to sleep.
Next morning...
Twilight said "well friends do your work" and they all said "bye" and they go spike and Applejack said "twilight i like..." And they said again "but i like Rarity" with an angry face they battle and twilight said "STOP!" They stop and explain why and they obey and they got working.
Night became...
They have the party again and rarity made a special dress for her special somebody Applejack came and gave the diamond and spike saw Rarity and spike gave another diamond to Rarity and Applejack and spike where gonna fight but Rarity kissed there cheeks and they feld and there friends gig. they where the best friends ever spike and Applejack got up stairs and they willl have a big fight tomorrow so they promise to be there.
Next morning again...
Everypony came and Applejack and Spike where super duper extra looper ready and twilight got there and rainbow dash is the flag retriper and twilight said "on your mark,get set,go!' and rainbow dash put the flag down and they run so very extra very extra very fast but pinkie pie said that and pinkie pie said "go ponies!" and AJ came 1st and spike was so tried AJ stop and helped spike and then spike run very fast and AJ catch up AJ was 1st again and spike said "not agian" and they run fast that AJ run and run and run insted she stop and spike won but Rarity came next to AJ an said "its alright Applejack here's your dress because i love you" and AJ was very happy and spike said "sorry Applejack for that but your my best friend again" and AJ had a fun day and Rarity kiss AJ again and AJ and spike merried because twilight find a beautiful dragon named Ammie and they begin to marry and the flowers where ready,the singers where ready and everyone is ready and they started and pinkie pie said "t-they grow up so fast (crying mode)" and they married they all took pictures after the wedding and they have a feast after that they build there dream homes and they lived happy ever after.
The End.

Comments

[IraqLobstah]

Can't tell if trollfic...

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

[AmazonRiderRX]

What is this I don't even

[Kody910]

Uh...What?

This is just....bad. I'm sorry. Nearly-unreadable dialogue, events out of nowhere, and purely random emotions.

[chavezery]

Gonna do a reading of this~
No but seriously, what the fuck did I just read @_@

[CheeseDeluxe]

Hey. Person. If you're trolling, make it obvious. If you're not, go in the corner and think about what you did.

[Thecrazyrabidfangirl]

Joy, another nikky0825 masterpiece

I sure hope this guy is a troll, if not, then I just lost the rest of my dwindling faith in humanity.

0.5/5 Because... I don't even...

~Rabbidfangirl

[Owndapwn]

But was Dash?

[Cytotoxin]

How... unpleasant.
If you entertain the notion of writing more of that kind... Please don`t.

[TheDorkside99]

dood or doodette i dont know because i cant tell through the computer screen but this was kinda funny because it read like a high school cheerleader who has a hot boyfriend named Spike who played in the super bowl ha ha ha ha did you see what i did there? oh my god this was so fun to read because yeah it was short and then that is all i have to say so im gonna go over there and die now. The End.

[lunadashscratch]

Hard to comprehend what's happening, bad grammer in general, to shallow no feelings actually portrayed, bad plot, events so impossible and unreasonable that even a high and wasted Pinkie pie could not understand them also I don't think this is good enough to even be considered to be called a troll fic
basically ...wtf Is this worthless not even troll grade piece of shit story I just read?
don't want to sound like a hater but that's my honest to god opinion on this thing

[Crakkiten]

XD awesome!

Hey.. Wait a second.. I read this, didn't I?!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fjt8jJGUlU8&feature=youtu.be

[Setlef a.k.a Silent Charger]

threadbombing.com/data/media/2/markey_mark_wtf.gif

ummm ummmm, what?

[Tailslover13]

Couldn't even spell "weird" right...unless you were seriously going for "wired", in which case...you'd STILL have spelled it wrong! But, yeah, either way...it's still bad. I'm ashamed of you.

[Serilain]

I am not entertained at all