her friends where helping twi. will they find the 4 secret things?
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i have a fan ponies and thats just every pony.
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I... don't even... What did I just... I don't...
0.5/5
Because... I don't even...
~Rabbidfangirl
I don't want to dismiss you as a troll just yet.
You more like a child more than anything (no offense)
your story is caked with errors and problems, and well.... he story is all over the place.
but if you are a troll....
10/10
After reading about 2-3 paragraphs, I am forced to assume either of two things.
1) English is not your natural language. I suggest learning it before trying to write fanfics on an English website.
2) You are a troll. If this is the case, well done.
Either way, 0.5/5
5/5
I have not seen literary prose of this magnitude for quite some time now. This was a piece of art, painted on the canvas of the imagination. It had powerful emotions deep within the entire piece, and I was quite surprised with Applejack's hidden crush on the fashionable mare. Using a skill I have not seen for many years, even in published fiction, you have written a veritable masterpiece that very well might become a famous fanfiction, becoming almost as famous as "Cupcakes".
I applaud your work, and look forward to a sequel. Maybe where they have the best night ever.