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Stealthy Corruption

Ever since Celestia turned her into an Alicorn, Princess Twilight Sparkle has been showing disturbing signs of change. Is she still the gentle pony we know and love or has she turned into something different? Read this random fan fiction that a 12 year old wrote out of boredom to find out! I mean.. That is if you don't mind..

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ocbaker

ocbaker #1 · Apr 15th, 2013 · · · The Past ·

It feels kinda rushed but an interesting idea so I favourite and wait for updates.

Comment posted by Reeve deleted Apr 18th, 2013

garfan

garfan #3 · Apr 15th, 2013 · · · The Past ·

I saw nothing in the show that suggested Celestia cast the spell

videocrazy

videocrazy #4 · Apr 16th, 2013 · · · The Past ·

That space for an introduction, the first bit of text your potential reader will see outside of the title? That's where you try to sell the story, make said reader want to read your story. It is not the place to state multiple disclaimers that read like criticism-proof shields and nothing but. ((Yes, I am aware you state "Pretty much a basic Twilight Sparkle Alicorn continuation speculated in boredom while waiting for the release of Season 4" at the beginning, but that tells me next to nothing about the story. It's certainly not going to convince me to read it.))

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