A unicorn showpony searching late into the night for answers. A pair of twins powering a machine belching smoke and steam. A griffin exiled from her native land huddled in a cave. A sleeping farmer clutching a prized possession. As the secrets the night reveals begin to destroy the lives they knew, these unexpected allies must band together to protect their home from a new threat.
They have been around for millennium, waiting, hunting, killing. The beasts lurk in the dark - but not for much longer.
Story inspired by The Illusionist by Nastylady on deviantART. Also, it's the cover art.
Chapters (1)
You have my interest, ill wait for another chapter to give a full opinion.
Where the hell is the religious fanatic toting the holy flame thrower.
This is awesome. I freaking love where this story is headed, and I can't wait for you to write the next chapter.
I noticed a single small error:
"The dream shattered. The farmpony's eyes shot open and he nearly rolled off the bed. His breathin
g was erratic, sweat poured from his body, and his behavior was akin to a cornered wild animal."
Breathing has that space in it. Other than that, everything works grammatically, and it has the potential to be one of the best fanfics out there. I seriously can't wait for you to write more of this.
2439555 Damn, that's still in there? I thought I got rid of that. Thanks.
2440345 is Trixie a werewolf? If not, there are two ways to become one: drink rainwater from a wolf's paw print, or get a blood transfusion from a werewolf. Note that werewolf live for about 700 years, have extreme senses(smell expressly it's better than a blood hound,literally), super strong and fast, and can become massive wolves at will. Even stronger and faster than before. I mean faster than most peagasi, and at least 3 times stronger than Big Mac,. Can only be killed by wolvesbane,silver, fire, or beheading. They're immune to the vampire curse and their blood is acidic to the fallen(vampires).
3279859 Trixie is not a werewolf, nor do I have any plans for her, or any of the other main characters, to be. However, I do appreciate the information about wolves in general - I may make a side character one.
I would love to see how this story develops; so far it seems to be off to a pretty good start, and I hope it gets to the point where I definitely will be favoriting this, and recommending it to others. That said, I would probably recommend it to others right now.