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I don't like the term brony, I perfer 'mentally obsessed with magical ponies'.

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Silver Sheild was once a Canterlot gaurd, but was critically injured one day during a flying drill. With a broken wing he's worried that he may never be able to fly again. Deciding to return to Ponyville in hopes to get rid of his stress he comes across and old friend that he hasn't seen in years, Mixmatch.

Silver grew up years ago, while Mixmatch insists that the best medicine is just to have a little fun.

((It's not a real tragedy, but it has sad parts. The story is meant to be a Dramedey))

~Canceled until further notice~

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

I think this is a good intro, but for a chapter ... seems to short. :applejackunsure: So ya I would change the title to say intro and then write ch1. Otherwise I like where it's heading.:moustache:

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I'll be honest the shortness of this chapter was unintentional :derpytongue2:. When I wrote the chapter it apeared to be much logner then it was when I submitted it :twilightblush::facehoof:

But I sertainly plan on making future chapters much longer (Let's just hope I don't misjugde another chapter size :rainbowlaugh:)

Yeah I like it I related to the main character alot. I though the parents were just like my parnets. Anyways as guyblue said PARTY HARD!!!!!

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m590g8HeVZ1rue690o1_400.gif

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Glad you enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:. I'm (slowly) working on the next chapter, so hopefully it will be out latter this week.

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Well that's great to hear! Being a dramedy I'm trying to make the character as relatable as possible.

Well...as relatable as a human could be to a magic pony :rainbowlaugh:

Kinda forgot what was happening :applecry: but ya still good

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Yeah unplanned hiatuses suck, but what can you really do? I'm going to try to get he next chapter out soon.

But I do have a treat planned for all you guys as an apology! :yay:

This is either an incredibly realistic portrayal of a normal day (sort of) or you somehow have some sort of connection to this. I remember that people said in the movie The Wrestler that Mickey Rourke seemed to be living the role instead of just acting in it. Is that the same with you in this story? Either way, I LOVE IT!

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Glad you like it :pinkiehappy:
But actually, I have no real connection to the story myself. Although what I typically do is write a story as if I were the characters myself, so they seem at least somewhat realistic.

So in short I'm pulling it all out of my ass :pinkiecrazy:

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