Twilight Sparkle is being corrupted in mind and spirit by the Shadow, a dark magical force from ancient times. Now Princess Celestia is in a race against time to find the key to saving her student and her friends from the seduction of the Shadow.
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2475710 It's also a really, really good picture of the new "Shadowy Twilight" I'm writing. I love it myself! :D
2475037 I know you're going to laugh at me, but the sight of your profile image always gives me a grin - especially because I love your commentary.
It just got interesting indeed. Awesome
I hope she noticed Celestia's reaction to Captain Winterlight's presence.
Heh, your story is frickin' great!
Only one point actually. Don't make it TwiDash fic, especially if you are using Twi + Mane Six tag instead of Twi + Rainbow Dash. It just doesn't make any sense ( and it's untruthful ). And by the way, it just feels really similar to the "Immortal Game" in that matter. Your using of Mane Six in Part 1 was quite good ( however, no Fluttershy. Seriously, I have a problem with memorize any of her quotes... did she do something "bigger" besides walkin' with mane six in this part? ), and in this one, we have only Twilight + RD and well, you already know the stuff. I suggest you to involve entire Mane Six OR delete Mane Six tag.
Okay, nevermind. More points. Capital Letters, you have quite big problems with that. Also, I spotted several times some tiny letter mistakes ( like misplacing one letter in the word ).
2477309 I don't actually know how to remove the group, since I didn't put it in the group in the first place.
Also - There will be lots more Mane-six. ^_^
ALso Also; Yes, I'm working on the caps thing. Heh.
2477309 Also Also Re:Fluttershy - Yeah, it was my first fic and I'm still getting used to writing Fluttershy. It's uh, more of a personal goof than anything else.^^;;; Hopefully, she'll be much better in this one.
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I was the one who put it in the main Twidash folder, though not the bajillion subfolders. Even if it's not the focus at all and Rainbow just ends up one minion of many, it seemed like there was at least a little bit between them going on (even if it led to Rainbowbeing corrupted rather than real romance), so I threw it in.
If I was just misinterpreting Dash being a loyal friend then it should probably be removed.
2478431 You're not entirely misinterpreting things (Trying not to spoil stuff here, even if it's really really long off stuff)
Still, I really dont know entirely how to handle this sort of thing. *Scratches head*
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My approach is to just put it in the general folder and let the moderators either take it out or categorize it.
My advice on spoilery stuff is to stay away from spoilers: if a tag or group spoils things then stay out of it or remain silent on the matter until it occurs in the story. If the tragedy tag would give away the ending (example: Asylum using the AU tag would kind of give things away, since the reader doesn't know if she's insane or in another dimension) then don't use the tag until the story is a tragedy (though classically the reader knows going in that it will be a tragedy)
brilliant!
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DAJACKEL PLEASED.
2476545 That's the reason why I put my profile image as that!
Anyhow... this is another good chapter, what with Celestia revealing that Captain Winterlight has lived for a thousand years?! Or maybe... Winterlight is a name that is inherited, with new ponies picking it up, that makes a lot of sense actually. o:
Then, we have some nice, juicy TwiDash act... I'mnothopingthere'llbesomeTwiMane6act,nooope.
2480039 Heh, There will be elaboration on the deal with Winterlight in the next chapter.
2480040 Oh don't worry. The rest of the Six are going to get their.... moments.
2480048 I can't wait! But then, I never been able to wait for your stories! They all are so awesome.
Teat should be tea, no?
i know this story is a bit kinky, but i think "network" would make more sense.
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Related to the story, huh? I have yet to see evidence of this. But, none the less, bearable... If it stays around this level of description. Does it stay this way?
2881498 Only if you don't know what it means. They basically do all the weird and bizarre jobs normal military can't do. This includes kidnapping, assassination, and torture, as the story mentioned. Almost every modern military has a wetwork team.
hahaha discord in his lets go meet the bronies form all most made me spit my water out it was so funny
i don't say this often but dam that chapter was kinky
it's existing
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Yup! These groups get their name 'wetworks' from the allusion to spilling blood. & as you mentioned, pretty much every major military power has a wetworks counterpart.