Twilight Sparkle is being corrupted in mind and spirit by the Shadow, a dark magical force from ancient times. Now Princess Celestia is in a race against time to find the key to saving her student and her friends from the seduction of the Shadow.
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Pinkie's reactions, you'll have to wait for, I'm afraid. ^_^;
The story is in the perfect place for the ending here. I may do a side story at this rate to cover some events which were cut to the next story, just so ya'll dont have to wait forever.
I keep wondering what discord is going to do with his day off coin. Whatever it is it will be a entertaining sight.
I don't know if I want Twilight to win or not.
I guess I kinda want her to be beaten but still keep some sexy shadow powers.
Oh, almost forgot:
MOAR!
I don't think I have loved this storymore than now. With Twilight on the verge of starting the war and the appearence that all is going in her, dark, favour, this story has become so much more than I ever could have hoped for. Keep up the awesome work.
For Twilight the Mistress of Shadow! And for the new Equestria!
So he did die... *says a small prayer* Such a shame. But he died for a cause it seems. He has kept his family safe. Celestia rest your brave soul, Carrot Cake.
I noticed a small mistake by the way. Spell check wouldn't have caught it since it's spelled right, but anyways
is that part "like it has been is idea all along!" supposed to be "like it had been his idea all along!" ?
Onto the rest of the comment. I am not saddened by the loss of the marshmallow diamond pony scene, since you have promised that it will be in the next book. This was a good second to last chapter before the epilogue. Discord is going to be up for something and it's nice that you've written how much he has changed thanks to Fluttershy. But is he referring to Starswirl in his thoughts and scene or is there some unknown male character about to appear?
That's about all then. Hope that you can reply to some of my previous reviews if ya got the time.
2614619 Thanks for catching the mistake there! I'll fix it in a jiffy, Im on a writing roll.
As to who Discord is referring to - It's supposed to be Star Swirl (and we'll find out how they relate to one another in the next book)
I'll do comments on some of your other review things later, once I've had a few days of relaxation post epilogue.
You're a bastard! I log onto fimfiction to find that my favourite fic has updated not once, but TWICE. What's worse is that I have no time to read it, so I'm going to be wanting to read it all day. Bastard.
AAAAA. Now I'm curious about the Epilogue. >u> *Goes to the next chapter*