Twilight Sparkle is being corrupted in mind and spirit by the Shadow, a dark magical force from ancient times. Now Princess Celestia is in a race against time to find the key to saving her student and her friends from the seduction of the Shadow.
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First off, PLEASE tell me you two are gonna stick around for the Code's Apprentice sequel. I LOVE your analysis going on here.
Secondly... Discord's got a part to play in this, no doubt. But just where will his claw finally fall?
Now that might be one of the biggest questions of all...
Oh yes...and there IS something important going on with him and Fluttershy as we will find out not too long from now.
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“But I don’t want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”
2527276 Your talking to a flying cat that can teleport. You're mad!
2527264 I think I should be around. Unless the world ends or there is a brony war. Now to read the new chapter and comment.
Sorry for double posting but just finished the chapter. You lied slightly, ya know? This chapter was just another setup chapter. Minor amounts of action happened in this chapter, stuff that could very well boil over into madness. But no rape happened. No serious craziness. Just setting up for things to go down deep dark paths. Like the CMC getting corrupted. Ye cannot tell me that three young lasses like them wouldn't get drunk on the liquor or at the very least tipsy. Then they would go for more, since they are always doing their best at whatever task they try.
Sorry if I am being overly critical about this chapter. I expected something a bit more insane and full of Shadow.
2528861 What, Dash suddenly turning into a very... encouraging minion and sucker punching [REDACTED] isn't crazy enough for you?
Well, I didn't mean to disappoint. Guess I'll have to step up my game.
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I loved the Code's Apprentice and am looking forward to reading the sequel.
I figured Applejack would be the one to offer the most resistance, and I guess that's been taken care of. Once Rarity and Fluttershy fall I can only assume they'll convert all of Ponyville before moving on to the rest of Equestria.
Looks like next chapter is going to be crazy. You know, if Twilight and Dash go through with this and at some point in time get "cured" of the Shadow, there is no recovering from what they are about to do. Their relationship with Applejack would be destroyed.
2528990 Not entirely taken care of... This scene has at least two more chapters of content.
What that'll mean is... welllll you'll see.
2528900 It was to be expected. Twilight is a very soft heart. Dash is less than that. Dash is prone to explosions of feeling, due to her very nature as a being. Loyal, to the point of being insane about it.
Disappointed? No, not really. I feel the next chapter will be all I hoped for.
2529123 Yeah, the next chapter is going to be the very first one with a content warning. Not the last one either. I'm looking forward to the writing challenge.
I can't wait to see AJ being converted! (And in a way, I also wish that none of them will recover from the Shadow... it's more fun that way)
I do wonder whether AJ will wake up in the middle of this... And maybe then you can show how AJ will at first resisting and slowly accepting before enthusiastically joining. That does sound how AJ will get corrupted... but then, I'm sure we'll see when the next chapter is finished.
See? My earlier speculation was true, it literally drains you of your morals.
I love being Wright.
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Thank you for this convenient segue.
Turnabout Storm started coming out at about the same time Fighting is Magic was being developed. Now FiM has been killed, and this saddens me.
Of all worst things that could happen, this is the worst possible thing!
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Yes, I want you to watch that, if you haven't already.
I personally gaurantee it will impress. I don't say things like that unless I REALLY think it's true.
2529774 Already seen it, actually.
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Well...
*Thinking of segues*
I want FiM back.
Though Lauren is working on the new project with them, it won't be about FiM.
They already had themes for... (Links)
2533584 And that certainly wasn't a writing mistake, either!
But WHAT DOES IT MEAAAAAN?
Just finished The Code's Apprentice and I'm loving where this story is going. You are officially my favourite writer on Fim-Fiction and from now on I will try to be a part of all the lovely comments that all the other readers have been posting.
2534246 Just keep in mind, This story is not a direct sequel to Code's Apprentice - That's going to be published later. :3 Otherwise, Welcome to our happy nutty family!
2534307 Yes I do understand that, It's kinda hard to think that it is the same story.
2534523 Someponies have already made that mistake. *laugh* I've just been trying to keep it headed off at the pass.
As a resident of Tennessee I personally love the Tenneighsee place mentioned in the chapter