Twilight Sparkle is being corrupted in mind and spirit by the Shadow, a dark magical force from ancient times. Now Princess Celestia is in a race against time to find the key to saving her student and her friends from the seduction of the Shadow.
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Title Drop and oh, how right it is. This chapter really showcase what Twilight now willing to do... when before she might not even consider it. Especially at the beginning, she might not even think of corrupting her friends, by now, she already corrupts two of them. Before, she won't consider killing now she saw the justification of killing others. Be careful Twilight, this is a Slippery Slope you are treading on.
2509774 Some minor changes were made in the last ten minutes, as I realized my fully edited version didn't get a proper copy-pasta over from Microsoft word, if you'd like to go see it. There's no major changes, but I cleaned up a few things.
Also yes, THIS entire chapter is the reason the last chapter was so tough for me to write properly.
Hehehe, yes Twilight. You are always so wonderful when in full on dark queen mode.
yep, i woulda done the same thing.
2509774 It should actually be noted that corrupting Dash and Pinkie were both accidental - In one case, she was under extreme emotional distress that basically broke her moral compass. In the second, she was drugged up to her eyeballs.
But now?
All bets are off.
2509840 Ah yes, that's true. But now when the bets are off? Things are going to get delicious very soon. I always love how you move the scenes, you are definitely one of my favorite chapter here!
All I have to say is daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn
So be it.... now that is a fantastic way to approach things. That end all be all sort of attitude. Now as for the chapter itself. Whoa....... Twilight's first kill. At least it was to a rather poor fool. Nothing against Rich, truly. But his business tactics were always rather rough and the one episode he was in really quite billed him as a bit of a bastard.
But this is a problem in more ways than I can count. She now stands as the Queen of her city, which may or may not mean that her citizens will come to her with all sorts of petty needs. Two, Celestia and Luna. Filthy Rich was a citizen of their land at the time, not in Twilight City. So this could be seen as an declaration of war. At the very least it will make Celestia truly aware of how far her student has gone. It will make Luna truly regret telling Celestia to relax and just trust that Twilight is able to control the Shadow.
Also, Shining Armor and Princess Cadence. They are on their way too... this is turning into a huge fight just waiting for that first punch to be thrown. I almost think it has. But this kill might be justified when she explains, that Filthy's men were harassing her citizens and she needed to do something about it. A bit drastic, but she was angry. Celestia might understand. At the same pace she seems already ready to find an excuse for a chance to invade Twilight City and remove/kill/destroy Captain Winterlight.
By the way, crazy as I might be, Twilight deserves to win. As for how to handle it? Alter the original ending you might have in mind and make it so Twilight is resting on her dark throne, tired, but with rule over ALL OF EQUESTRIA!!!!! *insert Fluttershy manic laughter*
2510014 Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh.
Things are just starting to get interesting.
(This is the Author being Evil right now.)
And further down the slippery slope of evil we go.
2510037 Oh, this is wonderful. Things are already fucking crazy and now they might get worse? *cheers wildly* Bring it on! DO IT!
Looks like there's no going back for twilight now...
...And so begins, the fall of Equestria.
Yea Twilight is loosing her morals fast. just a few more chapters and we'll be seeing innocents in that position.
Had a thought and an idea came to me. Maybe I'm thinking this class system way too hard, Fighters, Priestess and such. Maybe it's the old old system, Fighters, Priestesses, Maids, several ponies for the Harem and the Royal Harem.
Just a theory.
Updating is going to be a bit schitzophrenic over the next few days, due to finals.
I'll try to keep one per day going, though.
This story is totally FUCKING AMAZING! But I do hope Twilight doesn't become Nightmare Moon, I mean I am going for 'The Shadow' in this... Because it's totally badass, but the maidens really piss me off, and I want them to be pissed off!
But one question, what's the deal with Silent Moon? She white, so my basic brain struggles to find the connection with her and 'The Shadow', and she's evil? At least, I think she's evil...
But apart from personal proplems, this story is bloody terrific and I can't wait for more!
Shame it isn't very well known, but don't worry, I'll shove this story down my friends throats and make them read it!
Oh Twilight.
Looks like the Shining Armor's crystal ponies will see combat after all. Not to mention that war is coming to Equestria.
Here's hoping that light prevails in the end.
Twilight's gettin down right scary now
2513198 Silent Moon.... is special.
How special? Read and find out.
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Hate to tell ya this, but I think you're in the minority amongst the commenters. XD Still, I hope you keep enjoying the story!
2515392 You even put cliffhangers in your comments?! Skills man, pure skills.
2515399 OH trust me man, that is one cliffhanger I am looking forward to throwing my readers off of. You guys are going to go nuts for that one.
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Oh I am well aware of that. But are you saying that I will be disappointed with how things will turn out in part 3?
2515514 That would be a spoiler sir. But if I were you? I wouldn't count out the good guys just yet. There's quite a lot of story left to tell.
2515749 I hereby dub thee the Brian Blessed of comments.
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We know you too well Lapis. You'll be all doom and gloom for the first half, and then magic up a satisfying ending just like you always do.
Finally reading this story...
Twilight just pulled a classic bad guy mistake... If you have to kill someone, either don't let anyone know it was you, or kill off all witnesses (especially family) that might take it upon themselves to get revenge. I can see Diamond Tiara coming back with vengeance in her heart.
Now back to reading the rest of this story.
that sums up this story
One more step for Twilight on the path of a tyrant. She's doing it for the good of the common pony, but how much longer does the good of the common pony align with what the common pony wants?
All praise to the Shadow! May the darkness embrace us and we serve it in kind!
One-Applejack needed to bethe one holdout. She doesn't need anything DarkTwilight can offer.
Two-Twilight needs to hold on to more of her self and not take violence so lightly.
Three-Celestia needs to get of her flank and do something!
Four-Twi needs an intervention, Tia, Luna, Cadence and Shining need to call her out for her actions.
Also, isn't Twilght Hall still in Equestria. She is still a subject of Celestia and subject of Equestrian Law. So, isn't she guilty of murder?
All hail Twilight City, the workers paradise fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/311/d/f/communism_is_a_party_by_rainbowtrixie-d4fejgi.png
This was goooooooooooddd. Twi made sure they kniw who's Queen.
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Yes, & no. Yes, she is technically still in Equestria. But the Everfree has pretty much always been it's own domain, untamed by Celestia & her forces. Now that Twilight has control of a fledgling kingdom there, & the power to defend it, it is effectively, if not officially, its own nation.