Twilight Sparkle is being corrupted in mind and spirit by the Shadow, a dark magical force from ancient times. Now Princess Celestia is in a race against time to find the key to saving her student and her friends from the seduction of the Shadow.
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Prove that my earlier statement of
is completely Canon.th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2012/114/7/8/pinkie_pie_being_cute_by_sapoltop-d4xen8r.png
Yeah, I don't like the sheer amount of... kinky. You can write it however you want, but that's making it really awkward to read.
Or skim, in my case.
2497388 Don't worry, it wont be so thick as things go on. Pinkie was always going to be the cloppiest, simply by virtue of her place in the story.
Also: I didn't put the sex tag there for views. XD
Your crapping out 2+ chapters a day!
I LOVE IT!
I really shouldn't be surprised that Pinkie could be cast as a super kinky pony. Yet, I'm surprised... next I'd love to see Fluttershy. Currently crushing on her at the moment, so I figure if there was a poll or such, there's my vote.
Sundrops. Funny. A candy named after the sun, which such intense effects. Like the unwanted side of the sun, or a mockery of the sun. Of course I'm likely reading too deep. But alas... *snatches a few Sundrops and keeps them on hand for emergencies* I'm sure none of the Touched will mind if I have a few, right? I can at least plead my case to Twilight Shadow if there is really a problem.
Now I would like to be serious for a moment. One of my silly thoughts was 'Another short chapter' and honestly, I apologize for that brief thought. Especially after you explained it quite clearly earlier. Now, onto plot. What say there be a chance that some of the Touched changlings could take the forms of the missing Elements? They are such fantastic spies and they most likely learned their lesson and learned a lot about their foes after the last defeat. So they could safely delay and fool Celestia, at least until five out of the six elements are Transformed. Cause lets face it, there isn't much that can be done with one Element of Harmony.
Passing thoughts aside, good work as always and looking forward to the next chapter and the possible beating of Shadow Dance and Silent Moon. If Winterlight isn't going to get the chance. Mistress Twilight will at least lightly or seriously punish those two.
and caught this after my eyes briefly rested on it a second time. Last paragraph
I believe you might have intended to write licking her chops. or perhaps even lips. Sucks when you spell right but because it is spelled right, Spell check doesn't raise even a hint of alarm.
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-Mariangela
It honestly didn't dawn on me until just now. Twi Twi is currupting the Elements, and Flutters is an Element, so Twi Twi is going to try and corrupt her.
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!
No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no!
Even I don't like that concept... and I love this stuff.
You're making me look bad.
No, I'm making you look pervy.
2497780 Well it seems to be the straightest path. Loyalty would always be the first to go. From there it is random order...
2497815 Actually the order isn't random at all. *Grin* There's a reason for it, like with everything in my fic. MWAHAHAHAHAHA
2497850 Celestia just makes me give blank stares.
So there is an order... Laughter was not found after Loyalty though. It was Magic, Loyalty, Generosity, Laughter, Kindness, Honesty. *Castle, Bridge, River, Forest, Beast, Cliff* Of course that is my sense of the order. You may be seeing something different altogether.
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WARNING! THIS IS MY THEORY ON FUTURE EVENTS!
I like using the "Royal Canterlot Voice"
I fear for my mental stability.
You've never HAD mental stability.
Not listening! La la la la la la.
Why did you delete your comment? Was it a spoiler?
This fic can't be spoiled if we already know what's going to happen.
Really? So MR. Smartypants, if it's so obvious why don't you tell us?
It will be my pleasure. Twi slowly corrupts the rest of the mane 6, and at some point Celly finds out and tries to stop it. (Not bringing Luna because of her susceptibility to the Dark. They get in a physical confrontation "Hey chicka bump bump" and Twi Twi wins, (or it's a stalemate? Celly won't win, that's for sure) either corrupting her too, or kicking her out of the Everfree. At this point (after the Mane 6 are all beaten) the unseen "Dark Queen" Usurps Twi Twi and becomes the "Rightful ruler" Or Twi Twi beats her too, and becomes even more corrupted.
Thus is the end of part 2.
Thanks a lot!
You're welcome.
Sarcasm!
Oh.
If this is close to actual events, please delete my comment.
uuuu another good chapter. >u< Your story always have that feeling that makes me want to just wait until it finished, THEN I can read all of them at once. I think maybe after it all finished, I'll go and save all of them... I'll love to read them again later on. Especially in the future.
Now, let's wait for the future chapter, shall we? It's going to come out in 18 hours at most I'm sure.
2497979 but then if he deletes it we know its true
Sorry guys - But the update is going to be late tonight.
Chapter 9 is proving to be a massive structural headache. Even worse is this is the one part of this story I knew was going to give me fits, because I really want to put out a good chapter to segue into the second act.
The update will probably go out early in the morning my time, but theres' no way this thing is going to get done in the next 4 hours.
I'm going to try my damnedest to make tomorrow a double update to make up for it - which ought to be simpler, as Chapter 10 is slated to be much, MUCH easier for me to write.
2497871 The order is plot relevant, and will eventually be revealed. ^_~
2499689 It's gonna be a weeee bit longer than that, I'm afraid.
2503196 Ah ha... ye be an evil lad/lass, simply saying plot and sticking to it. I may just have to keep following around every chapter to see if the plot is so worth follow. :P
By the way. Thanks for posting bout the 'delay' on the next chapter.I have work tonight so I won't get to it till tomorrow. So it makes me sob less knowing I won't be missing an awesome chapter cause I have to work...
miam...miam....
I want more
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