Twilight Sparkle is being corrupted in mind and spirit by the Shadow, a dark magical force from ancient times. Now Princess Celestia is in a race against time to find the key to saving her student and her friends from the seduction of the Shadow.
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WE GOT BONUS CHAPTER SIIIIIIIIGN
Dun give me that look, Im trying to give myself some breathing room between the end of this and the start of Code of Harmony.
AWESOOOOOOOOME. I like the way you wove the tales around the Shadow, how it can no longer create something... makes me wonder whether the Shadow will regain it in the future...
I hope.And so, we know how the Shadow comes to life, and how the Shadow corrupts each of the race and defeated each time... will Shadow win this time? Will he lose again? Or will he lose permanently? And from the saying of hero... Is Scootaloo going to be the hero? Or will there be somepony else? What about those touched by the Shadow? Can they be saved...? Or is it permanent?
So many questions, and the answer is in the future. Let's see what future installments will bring! ^^
Yay~
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When I read this I kept thinking that only Celestia or Luna could enter. Not that only one of them could open the door.
2585505 Whups. Sorry if that was a bit unclear! ^_^;
2585560 Didja notice? The next chapter's already up! You guys get a bonus today, for being awesome. Go enjoy it!
Also yes, Discord is going to be awesome in the coming stuff. Without spoiling things, one scene has him dressed up as General Patton. I'm not going to give you ANY CONTEXT as to why.
absolutely epic! i FINALLY caught up, you're still mind-blowingly fast with your writing dude, i had to sacrifice other stories just to catch up!
i had chills almost throughout the entire chapter.
2585463 Hmm... First thing first.
So Umbra is a she. Next! The book is lost, as far as I remember. Or at least no one on the good side has it. So it will either win, or will lose permanently. Also! The hero is trapped in stone, and has been since Star Swirl's age. (Tho I wish it is Alicorn future Twilight.) And also, I believe Star Swirl said HE would be important. So it is a male anyways... (sign...). And finally! as was told on the story with the Deer, while Umbra was distracted all her victims were rescued and cured, so they can be saved.
My question is, When/If Twilight becomes saved from the shadow, what horrors will she release upon it in retaliation?! And what will Discord be doing?!
Yay! Bonus chapter!
I've never seen any other author pump out chapters like you do. Simply amazing.
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I will look forward to this scene, oh yes, I will look forward to it.
Excellent back story as to the origin of the Shadow. I'm curious as to who the hooded pony is. It might be Starswirl himself, frozen as a statue until the time is right to end what he started.
Hmmm, after Twilight gets Fluttershy she prepares for war I'm assuming? You know, we haven't seen any scenes that have updated us on the progress of finding the parts of the Equestrian military that have been compromised by agents of the Shadow. I'm curious how Spitfire is doing with that? I'm guessing that will come up in the near future.
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I'm going to be very disappointed if he doesn't dress whoever he opposes as Patton's nemesis.
2588561 Still not right on the war-kickoff thing! You will know when it happens - because it's gonna be the very last (well, mostly last) chapter. :3
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Hmmm, if she doesn't start to militarize after getting Fluttershy, then what is left for Twilight to do? Alicorn ascension?
I meant to review on the day of the double chapter, but my mood went bad as I kept having little SNAFU's all over the place. So here is the second try.
One, GRRR!!! I was at work when you dropped this double update. You meanie butt. Playful anger aside, great dual chapters. Lots of story explained in the second chapter and interesting use of the Shinto gods of the sun and moon. I was going to rage about that before, but now I realize I would be super anal in doing so, holding so close to what can only be described as legends.
Two. Interesting pull with Discord.I knew he would be fooling around and trying to stop Umbra. But Umbra was so sly, pulling out that new ruling. I cannot wait to see what will be done.
Well, keep up the good work. Looking forward to more. By the way. Has anyone guessed that Twilight will need to become a live sacrifice in order to fully unleash Umbra?
"And may we all meet again one day, in the clearing at the end of the path"
Took me a moment to think of where i had read that before. Nice nod to one of my favorite stories of all time.
Go then, there are other worlds than these.
Should have heeded your warning about huge story plot coming up.
But the story was well-crafted and awesome so far.
Man, I wish I could finish this today, but I already read the entire story of "The Twilight Struggle" and the first 22 chapters(including this one) of "The Twilight Fall" in like 10 seconds flat. okay maybe not ten seconds flat more like 6 hours give or take, but AWESOME!!!
Hey Lapis-Lazuli (minecraft fan I presume), I hope you can start writing "The Twilight War" soon!
Cheers and good luck!
Wow... I'm a heartless son of a bitch, aren't I? I'm rooting for the Shadow to claim world domination while the princesses are talking to ghost with deep feels.
I didn't even flinch with the feels. They simply slid off the Shadow over my heart.
Whelp! Time to watch everything burn!
UHH, Minotaurs are a BOVINE (cow) creature, not an equine one.
Sex, obscene? I think not.
Glad to see Go popping up in more stories & shows. It's a favorite game of mine.
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I mean, perversion has it's place in the world too. I am also cheering for Twilight Shadow, & for Umbra.