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FOR FUCKS SAKE
I WANT MORE

Corruption Twidash is best Twidash.

Dash should've been scared... but she wasn't. There was something soothing, something warm about those shadows. Her eyes were locked on Twilight's, and for some reason fear didn't seem to enter into it. Twilight had pulled Dash into her long limbs and slowly stroked her rainbow mane as the Shadows began to engulf them both. Huh. I wonder why I'm not scared? thought dash, somewhat absently as she walked the steady coat of darkness blanket them both. I think I'm in trouble. She thought with a touch more anxiety, the shadows now reaching her wings.

Capitalize Dash, and walked should be watched. Also not sure if you intended for "Shadows" to be capitalized.

2471805 the walked thing was my spellcheckers fault. Stupid thing.Otherwise, fix'd

Umm... where's luna in all of this? also I thought Celestia was filling the roll of Twilight's student.. hay I wanna see Twi corrupt Celestia to her power. that would be awesome and also help calm Celestia's scheming.

not that I'm demanding anything of you.

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Different universe, bro. This is not the Code's Apprentice sequel, that's not going to happen for a while.

ah ok then which sequel is it? or is it entirely new?

nvm found it it is the sequel to 'The Twilight Struggle'.

2471986 It's a sequel to The Twilight Struggle ^^

2471992 look up I figured it out I'm going to have to read the Twilight Struggle to remember what is going on the the best extent. cheers

2471992 Okay I wonder if Twilight will figure out a way to beat the shadow and convince it to submit to her will rather than try and break her morals to it's will. I'm really hoping for that but I really don't think that is what is going to happen.

OH MY GOSH

Well. Holy Buck.

Jesus Christ that was a good chapter!

Enjoy the feature box.

Also, I'm an idiot for asking if this was a trilogy, it says so in the descriptions. I hope this is the Empire Strike's Back of the trilogy.

well, that happened. and i freaking loved it! honestly, this chapter makes me wish there was clop scenes in this story.

2472967 Now hold your ponies, friend. We're only two chapters in! Wait fer the clop. :3

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i just freaking sqee'd in glee. i'm now getting funny looks from everyone in the coffee shop.

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Probably not in this story but maybe in part 3, at least thats what I'm hoping