It was very gripping to me, In a way that just grabs your cerebral cortex, and squeezes the sanity out of us as you would oranges for your morning juice.
Second foal-con story I took the time to read. Figured an author i knew to be of good quality was a safe bet. I was not wrong.
This story is incredibly well done. Perspective isn't the only thing that shifts. With it, the style of writing, and that makes it feel more like seeing through the mind and the heart than it does the eye.
Its a foal-con story done in remarkably good taste. It isn't just blind smut. It takes you in to their thoughts. How they feel, and what they are thinking about everything that was done. I particularly like the issue of debated love: the little lie Scootaloo tells herself to make it easier, while Rumble cant even pin his own emotions.
Vinyl scratch has a made friend Vinyl: yeah, but she hates it when I get affectionate in public
And if this is grim dark, introspective and deep, I have got to remove my hands and open my eyes ( like the aviators song) and now, I have to go hug lyra because I have painful feels
There are things that you can shut your eyes to stop seeing, or cover your ears to stop hearing.
Shut your eyes... Cover your ears... Eyes that can't see are useless... Ears that can't hear are useless... Why make yourself blind when you can stare back? Why tune out everything when there is so much to hear? Suddenly my mind has gone so deep it's almost too hard to hear.
2393721 And now there is moar
Very awkward, very poignant. Very readable.
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AWESOME CHAPTER BRO!!!
Damn, I really really like the way you did this one. It worked spectacularly. Really great job.
Rainbow Dash, Element of Loyalty aka Playing Favorites!
Wouldn't it be weird if Rainbow had done the same thing to Thunderlane, and he became a tailchaser because of that..?
2417521 Or, you know, he's just a dick.
Though I don't mean to confirm or deny anything. This is wip after all. I could do anything...![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
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Well, yes. That's always a possiblity. Some people are just kinda dickish. Not really mean, just- kind of a dick to most others.
Woo
Attractive story here.
Love how you're characterizing Scootaloo. This really is a very psychologically oriented story and I'm loving every minute of it!
WOW!!! The psychological bend to this chapter...
Just fuckin WOW!!!!
It was very gripping to me, In a way that just grabs your cerebral cortex, and squeezes the sanity out of us as you would oranges for your morning juice.
Awesome chapter. We need a thumbs up emoticon, or... hooves up? I don't know, something like that. I would put it here.
Best story ever. (Apart from the clop scenes, I sort of skipped them)![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
This is one of those stories that leaves me far more interested in where it will go than where it has been.
2419876 CUZ ANYTHING IS POSSIBLE
AT FLYING RHINO JUNIOR HIGH
Second foal-con story I took the time to read. Figured an author i knew to be of good quality was a safe bet. I was not wrong.
This story is incredibly well done. Perspective isn't the only thing that shifts. With it, the style of writing, and that makes it feel more like seeing through the mind and the heart than it does the eye.
Its a foal-con story done in remarkably good taste. It isn't just blind smut. It takes you in to their thoughts. How they feel, and what they are thinking about everything that was done. I particularly like the issue of debated love: the little lie Scootaloo tells herself to make it easier, while Rumble cant even pin his own emotions.
Truly amazing. I must see more.
At first I was worried that Scoots was pregnant.
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I'm not going to say what I'm going to do with it now, because even I'm not sure, but I definitely feel obligated to address it now.
This story was so damn juicy with soap-opera plottiness even I was completely unaware of just how deeply it went.![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
2426306 What You Can't Tell Anypony Else (Or Rumble's Reluctance) Review! I hope you love it!
Love the repetition. Great fic, really explores stuff that people aren't comfortable thinking about. You just earned yourself a like and a fave.
The feels. They're crushing meeeeeeeeeeee![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
And if the feels are crushing, you must be doing something right.
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Vinyl scratch has a made friend
Vinyl: yeah, but she hates it when I get affectionate in public
And if this is grim dark, introspective and deep, I have got to remove my hands and open my eyes ( like the aviators song) and now, I have to go hug lyra because I have painful feels![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
Arg man, mah brain.
Shut your eyes...
Cover your ears...
Eyes that can't see are useless...
Ears that can't hear are useless...
Why make yourself blind when you can stare back?
Why tune out everything when there is so much to hear?
Suddenly my mind has gone so deep it's almost too hard to hear.
Final line struck me in the heart.
The buildup was fantastic, it was great, and the drama gives me life, but...
god damn. That final line.
I wish I could write like you do.
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