This is such a revolutionary story in its own right, it's starting to inspire me to try something like this just because it has so many avenues for other events to happen, and so much possibility. You're doing a great job with this. Very good with the feels
Again, the way you write is amazing. Expressing the character's thoughts is a very important and hard thing to do, but you've hit it on the spot. Good job, please have more for me. I only check this site for story updates anyways.
Reading this chapter was a bitch, but I did get to read the AN. I usually don't read them cause they never show up on the reader, for some reason my reader won't work with this chapter. Anyway, another great chapter, so intense and sweet, I may have shed a few tears at one point.
I'm still waiting to shit myself i got the tissue readybut seriously bro i did want a happy ending cause I'm a cliche to love stories:unsure sweetie:but i fuckin love this story
2463627 I have lyra typing for me cause I have my arms wrapped around her and you smell nice BTW Anyways, I'll see if tvtropes takes suggestions And my heart is like warm ice cream, I feel so vulnerable... lyra, stop gagging, I'm not being... oh, too tight? Sorry..
I probably would have gone for a different kind of lazy and had Rumble kill himself, honestly.
(But that's me.)
HUDDA HUDDA HUH!
~Pyro, Team Fortress 2
2462466 I didn't want to go there. Suicide is very rare in the child's playbook of what to do when shit goes down.
Plus, he was essentially killing himself anyways.
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I'd say that depends on the kid, but it's not my story, and that is a fair point in response.
This is such a revolutionary story in its own right, it's starting to inspire me to try something like this just because it has so many avenues for other events to happen, and so much possibility. You're doing a great job with this. Very good with the feels
Don't worry; I do not plan on underestimating you, especially with what you've written so far.
I see dark clouds ahead.
I kinda laughed at this chapter because Sweeie Belle reminded me of Kenny. I feel bad. Great chapter.
2463329 Sweetie Belle is not going to die.
At least, I don't think so.
I love how you write, you actually flesh Rumble and Scootaloo's feelings in this; I just wonder if there will be happy ending for both of them?
2463544 I want this to end bittersweetly at best.
If I do decide to employ a happy ending, they'll have to earn it.
If only this fic would get famous enough for a TV tropes page...2463627 Fuck yeah.
I can't imagine a happy ending coming out of this trainwreck. Not that that's a bad thing.
Nevertheless, really looking forward to seeing how this ends.
Again, the way you write is amazing. Expressing the character's thoughts is a very important and hard thing to do, but you've hit it on the spot. Good job, please have more for me. I only check this site for story updates anyways.
Reading this chapter was a bitch, but I did get to read the AN. I usually don't read them cause they never show up on the reader, for some reason my reader won't work with this chapter. Anyway, another great chapter, so intense and sweet, I may have shed a few tears at one point.
I'm still waiting to shit myself i got the tissue readybut seriously bro i did want a happy ending cause I'm a cliche to love stories:unsure sweetie:but i fuckin love this story
aaaahhhhh, god man. no joke. this is the best fic i have read....ever.
2463627 I have lyra typing for me cause I have my arms wrapped around her and you smell nice BTW
Anyways, I'll see if tvtropes takes suggestions
And my heart is like warm ice cream, I feel so vulnerable... lyra, stop gagging, I'm not being... oh, too tight? Sorry..
The bandit cant be the king.
Another devastating chapter, Badger. This story never fails to chill me, both in either horror and pleasure, but also always in awe.
I know this is super late but.........
DA FEELS DA FEEEEEEEEELS!!!!!!!!!!!