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GjallarFox


You now face godlike judgement. May it extend eternally.

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After being saved by a quick thinking stallion, Applejack starts seeing numbers over everypony's heads. She finds it rather ominous that the numbers only go down. What do they mean? Why can she see them? Is she the only one who can?

Features (with permissions of course) my friend's OC, who plays a significant role, but has very little screen time.

No humans, despite cover image.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 41 )

"Sixty-eight, three-hundred, ten, twenty-two, fifty-two."

"Sixty-eight, three-hundred, ten, fifty-six, fifty."

Huh. So Twi and Shy are dying within half an hour of each other? (of course I would notice this...)

Now I'm wondering where you'll take this...

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Oh crap. I forgot about that. Of course I didn't mark it complete. Oh well, now I get to write more of this amazingly fun story. Maybe a threeshot. :3

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I too find the fact that Shy's and Twi's time are so close to each other intriguing. Also, this was inspired by that Nickelback video, right? Can't recall the name of the song though

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Very subtle TwiShy. But I won't be going into much detail because that isn't the focus of this story. But still. TwiShy.

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Yes. It was. But I can't find it for the life of me. If you find it, I'll give you a moustache.

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2384539 Neat, TwiShy! Also, Nickelback's Savin' me

Now, how about that moustache?

2384371>>2384252 I haven't seen the video, but it sounds like 'If today was your last day' Assuming that it is Nickelback.

Also, you had better not have been planning to end here. This story has high chances of success, and that is no way to end a one-shot (unless you have a group of writers who plan to write each chapter after.)

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You should go into detail though.

pwease? :fluttercry:

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Moustache for you. :twilightsmile: And a yay as a bonus.

:yay: :moustache:

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Based on the music video Savin Me isn't it?

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Indeed. It somehow resurfaced itself in my mind, though I never remembered what it was, so I could never find it on Youtube. I will be doing more with this concept, though. Like what's Celestia's number? And why can't she see her own number?

Incoming in the next chapter. I might finish that by the time I go to bed. (Not sleep. Bed. There's a difference.)

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Thanks for all the faves and comments and likes and things. :derpytongue2: You all make me want to keep writing. And write on, I shall! BACK TO WRITING NEXT CHAPTER! DARQFOX! HO!!!!!

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Maybe. I'll think on it. This is more leaning towards an AJ ship. I'll make it fairly obvious in the next chapter.

And I foresee Celestia declaring how proud she is of AJ at the start of the next chapter...

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Currently in progress, and you'll have to wait and see.

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Well that was fast.

Glad there's more.

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:heart: There shall be blunt-as-all-hell TwiShy in this upcoming chapter. WARNING! Incoming Romance tag in next update.

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Yes.

Oh, love your avatar. It's adorable. I'm almost jealous. But I am the Butterfly Dragon. I win.

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TwiShy > Butterfly Dragon

:twilightsmile::heart::yay:

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The Butterfly Dragon IS TwiShy. You read and faved it, remember? :facehoof:

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Meh, the trollestia bit feels a bit unnecessary. Other than that, very interesting and the prospect of TwiShy makes it even better! :yay::heart::twilightsmile:

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:trollestia: I made the troll-bridge comparison, and my mind continued without me knowing. Perhaps it was, but now that I see it, it's mildly amusing. Gave myself a good chuckle.

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This fic is going to change directions pretty quickly. I recommend holding on to thine undergarments.

TwiShy, dem numbers, but their so close, does that mean :pinkiegasp::raritycry::pinkiesad2:

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Yes it does. Read on, brother.

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this is what I thought of when I read "I wanted to be a Hero."

It's good, really good.:pinkiehappy:

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:pinkiegasp: You tink so? :yay:

Fourth chapter is currently in progress. Incoming shipping. Lots and lots of shipping.

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So Pinkie/dash is the next shipping?

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Aww HELL NAW! I can't ship Pinkie. I approve of AppleDash and Twidash, but no Rainbow Pie. NO. Just.

No.

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2395172 So0, who is Rainbow Dash going to be with than?

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Obviously the kitchen sink.

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Who said there was Dash shipping here? But yes, there will be slight shipping with Dash, but no Pinkie. I can't ship her...

One-sided TwiDash inbound. You've now given me two options on where this story goes. Thanks. Now I have to debate my original plan. :ajbemused:

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Eh, I don't really like TwiDash.

But then, I don't like most of the popular ships anyway, for whatever reason...

I saw a young stallion wearing a white headband running down the street.

So where is the line between helpful exercise and harmful work?

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'Tis not a line I plan on drawing here, friend. I'm focusing more on the shitstorm I'm about to throw at you.

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A crossover with the music video of one of my favorite songs? THIS IS GENIUS!

It's funny. When I heard the concept of seeing other people's numbers, I immediately thought of the shinigami eyes from Death Note. But it's still a pretty cool story concept!

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Wow. Haven't gotten a comment on this in a long time. But yeah. This fell victim to writer's block. But I think I know how to solve it.

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WHY HASN'T THIS GOT AN UPDATE!? Gerrr :twilightangry2:

:rainbowlaugh: Wow, this fic is good. I really want to see more! This actually has inspired me for a few things, book scenes in my book, plus a great way to spread the the fares in my book. Rarejack, twilyshy, And 'Dashie Pie'! (I trolllll! Maybe... I will or not, depends if there jokers or not...:trollestia:)

Though with this idea i must ask if i could implement it within my book? [Main character see numbers for a bit, till he gets hit in the head with a pot. (And yes, it's going to have twitchy tail action and saving a prince too!)]

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