shit warmed over.

Like me at 4 O'clock in the morning [My natural wake up time (God hates me XD)]

Also I wish I could SPAM that like button!

Really nice. I wonder what they are going to do now.

5812135 Right then if you're so good why don't you show us that you have and could do better, eh?

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Alright. I'm getting hounded in messages by your friend so I'm going to tell you the same thing I told him:

"Okay. This is getting out of control. I gave you a bad review and you should be able to accept it without acting like this. Grow up, fifteen or not this is insane. I told you what I thought and the problems I saw. I don't HAVE to prove anything to you. You put your story out there and I review it. Over forty people agreed that they didn't like it either, they just didn't say anything, and you blocked them out."

Before I get nitpicks like I did with him I'll add the following:
I reviewed more than one but mistakenly put 'review.'
He didn't block reviews, I meant that he blocked out the fact that there were problems.
I do have an actual writing account. I can't say I'm connected with it because I'll get spammed there too. Not that it matters. Anyone can review a story.
Finally, I did have massive problems with the story, but I did see potential here and there. A few chapters were great. That's more than some people would have given.

Either way, I did the story to its completion and I am proud of that.

Awesome story, you doing amazing job. Are you going to make anymore vomit stories?

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Ok, that's a genuine error from me, I have no excuse for that.

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I include sound effects because they are just as much a part of painting a picture as the scene itself. It's called immersion.

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Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaybe. :)