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You sir, are a freakin' genius of a writer! I just hope Josh can be completely healed after all he went through and that he doesn't become closed off either. Please update again soon!
Wow. Poor Josh. And I'm glad they are kind of giving Gilda a chance.
facepalm I didn't think it was possible that Joshua could force more of himself on the story. I thought this was about Rainbow Dash and Applejack having an eating contest, but it's not. It's about Joshua lamenting about his past, about his tragic backstory, bad family, injuries, sudden shots on his face, everyone having a moment where they admire him, why can't there be one chapter not dedicated to Joshua? We get it that he was injured and that he suffers and that he's a lost soul. There has got to be a point when we can focus on what Rainbow Dash and AJ are feeling, about their fears and what they are worried about, and not when its another concern about him!
Hey, I think I did a decent job on this story. Maybe a little unusual at times, but I think it altogether is at least entertaining.
Even rereading it 5 years later, it's pretty cool to me.
What do you guys think?