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Amazing. Truely amazing writing. And strangely enough, I didn't feel sick at all after she said what those things were.
I like it a lot![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
This guy just loves keeping his mouth caked in blood. I'd sue the hospital for negligence. Aren't they supposed to clean the patients? I guess with his constant outbursts they aren't going anywhere near him. She doesn't know how much she can take? I don't know how much I can take.
Then suddenly I'm in a different story where Joshua's only mentioned casually. Where the focus is on Rainbow Dash and AJ and an enjoyable plot. Gilda brings in dishes that are both gross and pretty cool at the same time. It's a trial and error practice and after that time devoted to that the moment at the end between Rainbow Dash and Joshua seems a lot better. So you can clearly write well and you can have a moment that's not dictated by the constant need to surround Joshua, it even makes Joshua more enjoyable.
Maybe I've underestimated this entire story.
Again, unfortunately, all those are real dishes.....
As for the blood on his teeth, whose to say he didn't just cough up a little before Dash had arrived.
5321008 ......Ok, so maybe I DO overuse him a bit..... I'm not a perfect writer by any means, I do make mistakes.