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Poor guy. Glad he didn't get in trouble. I'm curious. Did Dash finish ALL her food before leaving?
Am I the only who thought of 'I Didn't Know I Was Pregnant' when Dash was on the toilet?
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What's "I Didn't Know I Was Pregnant"?
Sorry, I've been taking care of a LOT of personal business
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Yup. Every bite.
There's no point in reviewing every chapter so I skipped the last few. Firstly everyone suddenly wants to screw Joshua because clothes made him super sexy. I can't believe that was even a thing. But wait, wasn't he scarred up? Bubbled, boiled eye that fixed itself in - what- two days? This is all taking place in a two week period so it couldn't have been that long. You could say magic fixes it, but half of the time Joshua claims normal magic won't fix him, and he gets dues ex machina potion. It was almost a relief to finally meet Cascade for those few seconds.
Joshua performs like he's been singing for years and wows everyone in the building. We get it. You don't have to rub in how much we need Joshua. Hell, I woulda thought it was a somewhat interesting scene if it wasn't built up with constant praising and sympathy for him. A little of that can go a long way. Go a chapter without bringing in his past injuries over and over and then maybe we can talk about a musical number. For a guy who treats his girl like his kid and his sidekick like his lover he's pretty unbelievable.
Again he's attacked and I'll be dead if I didn't call it beforehand. I guess the last pity party was too many chapters ago. That's fine, I was tired about hearing about him getting attacked by Champagne. I'm ending it here because there's nothing else to say.
Ok, to make it clear... Twilight making the "call me" gesture to Josh WAS A JOKE!
Do i here Total Drama Island